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~A Gift of Fate~
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~A Gift of Fate~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*tribute* ~A Gift of Fate~ Between us there is constant ... we need not say good-bye, we need not ask the reasons, this love long since quieted all the whys. We need no long last looks, no parting kisses in the night, for we are always as one ... even as you return to the light. Between us, our hearts sang all the words, no emotion was left unspoken, we shared love unconditionally ... no promises were ever broken. On this journey all roads led back to one another ... the gift of destiny, now your path leads you farther on ... I cannot follow ... this too was meant to be. Between us there is the peace in knowing we sweetly danced with fate, we wished upon celestial stars and heard angels sing of Heaven's gate. We held each other desperately ... while loving enough to accept having to let go, now the wind and tides carry you away from me ... this is not where you belong, I know. Between us there is magic, and it makes a joyous sound, 'tis the song of angels sighing, 'tis my prayers rising up, heaven bound Still in spirit we are one ... this love to ever last ... The gifts of fate to believe ... we are the future, the present, the past. Janet Marie *for ~DeVante'~ ... as promised with love, always* |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Between us there is magic, and it makes a joyous sound, 'tis the song of angels sighing, 'tis my prayers rising up, heaven bound Still in spirit we are one ... this love to ever last ... The gifts of fate to believe ... we are the future, the present, the past. Jan, Jan, Jan I love the power of this piece. Perfection as always m'friend Later Jan-gator...hehe All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
This is so lovely, JM -- such a special poem - written by a special person netswan |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Tihis is wonderfully powerful in a beautiful soft sentimental way. Lovely J. Marina |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
J. Marie, As if this poem isn't touching enough, knowing the inspiration behind it makes it even more special. You were truly blessed to have him. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Still in spirit we are one ... this love to ever last ... The gifts of fate to believe ... we are the future, the present, the past. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ How comforting it is that this is true and he will always be there. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JM, Beautiful, simply beautiful... LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) J.M.* My sweet S.S.!! This is so beautiful with an air of sadness....as fate can also be. Your talent to totally capture my attention and my heart continue to amaze and delight me, just when I think that our common thread has been a long winded fluke you look into my soul and remind me once again of the overpowering feeling of knowing. Thank you for sharing this my sweet S.S. **AW hugs** |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is indeed a tribute to touch one's heart. Beautiful writing, Janet Marie. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you SO much my poetic sweet friends... here I was struggling to find my muse and all I had to do is close my eyes, hold a memory and keep a promise. I am so touched by the replies to this one... we are only as good as our inspiration... he was a gift from the poetry Gods. *smile* later-poet-gators...  (hehe to you too Jeff) LOL jm |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was so touching and incredibly sentimental Janet Marie. You've captured your emotions well in this piece ... lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ I enjoyed your heart in this piece. 'Between us there is magic, and it makes a joyous sound, 'tis the song of angels sighing, 'tis my prayers rising up, heaven bound Still in spirit we are one ... this love to ever last' Very pretty thoughts are these. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
"Still in spirit we are one" beautiful sentiments of Love, and oh, that gift of destiny. JM, this is really nice, and sad, and written with that talented pen of yours that gets its inspiration straight from the heart. So, on a journey to the top we go with this one. JM, thanks for bumping my Mothers' Day poem up on Sunday. Your so sweeeeeeeet !!!!!! A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear Janet Marie; I just found this treasure of incredible sadness and beauty. This is so romantic and heartbreaking. I don't know the whole story and I wish this had turned out happier for you. It sounds like you found acceptance. The poem is exquisite as you are so dear. Love, Ellie (thanks for your sweet reply ) 02 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely, heart felt, and warm. A very warm melancholy, a realistic outlook, a loving tribute to a friendship, a wonderful verse, a memorable time in your life, a rare glimpse into your spirit. A special poem Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is superb...that is the word for it. And amazing I think will do too...  K (the sharer of the icon...  ) |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is just wonderful, JM... It's one of those "I wish I wrote it" type poems, ya know???.....  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
JM...my oh my, this is the next best thing to cold oatmeal (and as you know my friend, that can be a very good thing ) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Janet Marie! Just lovely! Denise |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Janet, it sings from your heart. Just a loving piece and true tribute. Loved the read. Parker |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm with Nan...I wish I wrote this...it is so beautifully heart breaking yet so possitive and pure...just perfect! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Simply awe inspiringly beautiful, Janet. I am lost for words here, yet I try to contribute to your tribute... Us, We're destined to be one, Decided by fate, what was in body count two but soul one... Reeds blowing in the breeze, Music that they make is our magic, The stars of the night, they freeze, Angels sigh, fairies wink, is all so ecstatic... Regards, Sudhir< !signature--> Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-17-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
THANK YOU SO MUCH for the unbelievable replies to this... you cant know how much they mean to me and coming from the HIGH CALIBUR of poets that I admire and adore so much... I am truly touched, humbled and complimented. you guys are SO special. THANK YOU!! Sudhir THANK YOU for the beautiful poetic reply... |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Awesome poem Jan! Honored to have the chance to read it before it's been published. "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
jan-- BEAUTIFUL...SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!! As always your poems hit me straight in the heart. You have an amazing gift...glad to see you got your muse back! Love ya much, Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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rodger_jr Junior Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 37Glen Hope, PA |
Janet Marie, I liked this poem very much. Could cold oatmeal be considered a gift of fate. Yes, I'm hoot_owl_ rn's, Rodger. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
I like this. a lot. it's saying goodbye, letting go, and remembering; but not doing it alone. you start to take different paths, but it's like you've got walkie talkies. Diff relationship but same feelings. i've never experienced such a good ending, but it sounds good. (and hard too. but i guess all endings are...) Excellently done. that is, if excellently is even a word... oh well. i liked it! --------------------------------- Between us there is constant ... we need not say good-bye, we need not ask the reasons, this love long since quieted all the whys On this journey all roads led back to one another ... the gift of destiny, now your path leads you farther on ... I cannot follow ... this too was meant to be. We held each other desperately ... while loving enough to accept having to let go, now the wind and tides carry you away from me ... this is not where you belong, I know. ---------------------------------- i felt these parts the most. =) We all got somethin' we need to atone for. |
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