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~A Gift of Fate~

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Ethan Halo
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on the roof again


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I like this. a lot. it's saying goodbye, letting go, and remembering; but not doing it alone. you start to take different paths, but it's like you've got walkie talkies. Diff relationship but same feelings. i've never experienced such a good ending, but it sounds good. (and hard too. but i guess all endings are...) Excellently done. that is, if excellently is even a word... oh well. i liked it!
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Between us there is constant ... we need not say good-bye,
we need not ask the reasons, this love long since quieted all the whys

On this journey all roads led back to one another ... the gift of destiny,
now your path leads you farther on ...
I cannot follow ... this too was meant to be.


We held each other desperately ...
while loving enough to accept having to let go,
now the wind and tides carry you away from me ...
this is not where you belong, I know.
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i felt these parts the most. =)


 We all got somethin' we need to atone for.

 
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