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~*"Liberation" Senryu*~

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Honeybee
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~*"Liberation" Senryu*~

5-7-5

Knowledge and kindness
the keys to liberation
open life's gold doors

By Melissa Honeybee



[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 05-15-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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WOW that was profound and beautiful. Thank you, wise and honorable sensei.  
Honeybee
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2 posted 05-15-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for Honeybee   Email Honeybee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Honeybee

~Brian~

Thank you so much for the compliment, you had me laughing at the sensei part, I only wish LOL thanks again though   Why don't you try to write senryus or haikus, I am sure that you would be brilliant at them, and I, of course would be first in line to reply!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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This is lovely, Melissa!  

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Excellent Melissa. . . *bowing*

Profound and wise...

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you had me staring in awe at your little gem....simply beautiful
 
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