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Midnight's Love Song

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Effigy
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0 posted 05-15-2000 03:53 PM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Effigy

Take me down.
Take me down
you brought us around.
Take me down.
Take me down
weíve reached the ground.

Iíve been lost in your eyes
for so very long.
Iíve been lost in mind,
knowing  who you are.
Youíve been found in my soul,
and it makes me strong.

I wrap my arms around you.
I pull you in tight.
I know I canít live without you.

SoÖ

Take me down.
Take me down
lost in you Iíve found.
Take me down
Take me down
Iím forever bound.

I need you to be
the one I see,
when I close my eyes.
I need you to hold,
when I can sleep no more.
I need you just
to need me.

PleaseÖ

Take me down.
Take me down
lost in heavenly sound
Take me down.
Take me down
in you Iím found.

"Just thought I might try to write something nice for a change. what a strange feeling."  



†There is something inside me
and I know it's good,
but understanding is misunderstood.
  




[This message has been edited by Effigy (edited 05-15-2000).]
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1 posted 05-15-2000 07:51 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Effigy~
What a delightful read.
I like it ... hope you get to feeling
'strange' more often.
~*Marge*~


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Effigy
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2 posted 05-16-2000 02:10 AM       View Profile for Effigy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Effigy

Thanks Marge. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
forne_marin
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3 posted 04-16-2004 12:08 AM       View Profile for forne_marin   Email forne_marin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit forne_marin's Home Page   View IP for forne_marin

Wow. Very atypical of you. Very rhythmical, very metrically smooth. Not much on this one, except to say I like it.
 
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