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Open Poetry #7

May

RAM
Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

0 posted 2000-05-15 02:36 PM

a warm, May breeze sifts
through the patience of this screen
dreaming our return

© RAM 5/15/00

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-05-15 04:27 PM

Breathtaking…I think I'll go outside and get some fresh air.

Excellent poem!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-05-15 04:32 PM

The most beautiful month of them all, I believe! This is lovely, Rick!

Denise

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-05-15 07:55 PM

Ram~
I like the touch of your May breezes,
blowing gently through my mind.

Very, very serene and yet it blows
with anticipation.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2000-05-16 12:02 PM

Yes, what Marge said, RAM. What Marge said.

Core

RAM
Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

5 posted 2000-05-16 11:41 AM

Thank you, insect. I hope the air was refreshing.

Thanks, Denise.  May is, indeed, beautiful, although I'm kind of partial to Fall.

Marge, it blows with that and more.  Thanks.

Sweet anticipation, sweet Core.  Thank you.

Rick

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

6 posted 2000-05-16 01:01 PM

~Mmmm,...beautiful little piece here.

RAM
Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 153

7 posted 2000-05-17 10:56 AM

thanks, Spitfire

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