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The Final Destination

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Wobbly Head Bob
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0 posted 05-15-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for Wobbly Head Bob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wobbly Head Bob

Deep inside is where I hide
I'm hiding from the information
Wanna get out know what its about
but I've lost the inspiration
Here again with you my friend
We're gonna get a confirmation
Of the deed follow my lead
I'm looking for the constellation

Looking for we gotta find more
And work on the calibration
Walking through and I'll follow you
Theres gonna be a celebration

On the phone we're not alone
Better watch the punctuation
On the ear you know they'll hear
Have to keep up with conversation

Oh too soon out on the moon
We're missing the gravitation
Hear him speak my heart got weak
We've made the final destination

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Nan
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1 posted 05-15-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I see some real talent here, Wobbly... hehe... good name... You've made your point and used a very difficult device quite adeptly... Internal rhyme is pretty difficult to pull off with the consistency I see in your work...

Keep 'em coming Wob....  
 
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