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TerryW
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0 posted 2000-05-15 02:20 PM


Guardians of the Night




The soft velvet blackness
Of the clear nighttime sky
Is broken only by the twinkling
Of the stars above so high.

They shine brightly overhead
And pulse with purest light
A heartbeat of the heavens
Ever patiently guarding the night.

We are watched from the heavens
As the last day's trials grow old
We can rest safely until tomorrow
When a new day will unfold.



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

© Copyright 2000 Terry A. Woodson, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-15 02:37 PM


Very beautiful, Terry, peaceful and uplifting!  

Denise

TerryW
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2 posted 2000-05-15 02:54 PM


Thank you, Denise~  I am glad you liked it!

Love Ya~



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

insect
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3 posted 2000-05-15 04:06 PM


This is a wonderful poem. I also feel guarded by the stars above.
netswan
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since 2000-03-28
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4 posted 2000-05-15 06:30 PM


Wow, Terry this was slipping down to
page two  ------THAT will never do.

Wonderful inspirational work here

netswan

brian madden
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ireland
5 posted 2000-05-15 07:07 PM


We can rest safely until tomorrow
When a new day will unfold.

those are the perfect words to end a day on, it is midnight here and with the lullaby I am bound to sleep soundly and have sweet dreams goodnight and thank you, that was beautiful.

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2000-05-15 07:42 PM


Terry,
You words are so beautiful, my friend.  I really can almost see that new day unfolding!!  Great work!!!  
LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 2000-05-15 07:46 PM



Terry* What a sparkling display of your talent  

A heartbeat of the heavens
Ever patiently guarding the night.

beautifully done my friend!!

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-05-15 09:32 PM


TerryW~
You've touched a chord of my heart
and played a lullabye of delight.

I love it when you put the stars on display and keep them twinkling until the sun kisses them good morning.

I like this a whole bunch-a-lot !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
9 posted 2000-05-15 09:35 PM


Terry, This was so simple and short, yet it said it all.  Whenever I have a bad day I always try to feel that tomarrow is a new day.

Marina

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2000-05-16 12:25 PM


Terry.
this is a lovely serene and comforting poem
perfect!!
the stars make for amazing inspiration.
take care, jm

hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 2000-05-16 11:52 AM


I like, I like  
TerryW
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Louisville, Mississippi, USA
12 posted 2000-05-18 12:01 PM


Everyone~
     Thank you for reading this one.  I am so glad that you all enjoyed it!  I promise you, I enjoyed writing it!



Love to All~

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

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