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Demons awake in Hell .

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angelswing
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0 posted 05-15-2000 12:38 PM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angelswing

Demons awake in Hell .

The perfect picture,
Hanging on the wall,
A face so perfect,
From there it calls,
But out of reach,
The dreaming lies,
Deep down inside something cries,
Stirred up,
Upset,
The demon crawls,
Awakened in itís bloody hall .
Death befalls,
Within his wrath,
His evil choking,
Smiting laugh .

  
Written by Tom Baker .



 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-
© Copyright 2000 angelswing - All Rights Reserved
TerryW
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1 posted 05-15-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Tom~
     Very dark and powerful piece.  I feel the strength coming from the poem.  Very perceptive writing, my friend!



 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
angelswing
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2 posted 05-18-2000 04:03 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Thanks very much Terry, I am glad that you enjoyed it, I find it very difficult to write about anything that isn't dark or negative at the moment .
L.of.L. Tom .


 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-
netswan
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3 posted 05-18-2000 05:29 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Wow Tom, this is deep and dark.
All the light and sweet comments you
give to the writers in here - one would
not see this side of you.

netswan
SpitFire
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4 posted 05-18-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Cool read for sure.  Like a mask of sorts hiding this demon you speak of....it's in the best of us somewhere.......take care.
Angelwings
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5 posted 05-19-2000 01:32 AM       View Profile for Angelwings   Email Angelwings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angelwings

Wow Angelswing~
I'm quite honored to have such a similar name to someone with such talent as you.  The image you paint of the pain you feel right now through the words of the demon in hell, illustrate all of the emotions.  Wonderful poem and poems that portray dark images are often the most therapeutic.



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*** ():~) ( ***
/,,,,

angelswing
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6 posted 06-29-2000 04:18 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Thanks alll, this is probably my most powerful piece and yet i was in a relatively good mood when I wrote it, I sometimes think That I enjoy being depressed, then I think how bad it is and change my mind, Thanks for the way you see me other side as some people never see this side of me .
L.of.L. Tom .


Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-
angelswing
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7 posted 07-12-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Dear Angelwings, What made you chose your name as I can't help but feel we must be on a similar wavelength, I am going to endevour to read some of your poetry, but my computer always seems to crash as soon as I start doing a long search .
L.of.L. Tom .


Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -
Lady Lost
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8 posted 07-08-2002 12:20 AM       View Profile for Lady Lost   Email Lady Lost   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Lost

Extremely Powerful!! Bravo!   You have expressed your emotions so well!!  Don't mind me, I am purusing your writings and this one really caught my eye.  I can relate to the dark side better than 'blue skies and butterfly' pieces.  

This is masterfully written and certainly captured your strong and intense emotions.

Write on!

Bethann

What is past is prologue;
what to come,
In yours and my discharge.


 
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