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Don Juan de Feu
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since 1999-10-15
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0 posted 2000-05-15 12:35 PM



    On Purging
the Urge to Merge


I am in heat! I feel
a kindred with the ewe
and doe, where estrus
gets the best of us,
with urgent clamored cue,
a hammered glockenspiel

propounds relentlessly
seduction's symphonies
three days and disappears.
Recurring endlessly,
the hunger we appease
and when its fancy clears

this hormone borne disease
remission finds. Different
than cloven-footed friends,
I am constrained to please,
with chastity's consent,
these reproductive yens.

Beyond the fittest male,
is it that self restraint
a higher purpose fills,
that Union yet instills,
to passion's curt complaint,
its lifetime holy grail?


--Don Juan de Feu


© Copyright 2000 Don Juan de Feu - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
1 posted 2000-05-15 12:43 PM


Very interesting poem, it took me quite a long while to understand but once I saw the deep underlying message, a new it had the makings of a great poem . It was a little bit different in the way that it was written, and the language that you use makes it even more individual . Nice job, keep up the good work .
L.of.L. Tom .


 Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.-

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