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When Death Comes Knocking

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Elizabeth Santos
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25 posted 05-15-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

marina,Your remarks are so much appreciated. Thank you

Rainbow, Smoked makeral? Ugh! Anyway, I never said there aren't tears, There are always lots to go around, but I like to also laugh through har times

Balladeer, We think alike, my friend.
Thank you

Liz
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26 posted 05-15-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Oh, Liz... this is a beautiful poem. Death isn't such a terrible thing... thank you for reminding us!

Love you!

-LoveBug

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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Liz my first thought was sadness. But after reading it in its entirety you've described a beautiful passing! And Balladeer's right! It is mourned by those left behind. Even near death experiences will tell ya they didn't want to come back here.

Beautiful job!

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Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become.

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28 posted 05-16-2000 01:11 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

im glad yuh know that it will all work out to God's will either way it will soon be allright love you i do
Elizabeth Santos
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29 posted 05-16-2000 05:36 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Lovebug,
Thank you, dear. Sometimes it can be terrible, if we lose a child, for instance, sometimes it is  incomprehensible, but for someone who has lived their life, it isn't so terrible. We can't always understand what God does.

Whitedove, It is certainly more painful for us , the living, I believe. Thanks

Wayoutwalt. Thank you for your comments
Liz
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30 posted 05-16-2000 07:06 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh this is beautiful....and I guess death is terrible when you are the one left behind.
Loved this!!!  


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


 
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