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~wings of an angel~

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tracie66
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0 posted 05-15-2000 05:09 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Is that you flying free with me tonight
Touching my every being

Is that you flying so free tonight
Dancing under the bright moonlight

I wish that I could be as free as you
Flying high upon the evening dew

Flying free, soaring so high
With wings of silver reaching the moonlit sky

You've got darling little angel wings that softly caress the night air
And sparkling dust of gold flows from your golden hair

I've never seen anything as magical as you sweeping across the tree's
Hair of gold, wings of an angel caressing against the breeze

"goodbye my little fairy friend" I say as you take flight
I watch you as you drift away towards the full moonlight

Wishing upon every star that I could be just like you
Spreading my angel wings and dancing upon the evening dew

To all the fairy lovers out there I hope you like this  


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 05-15-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 05-15-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Ah, Tracie, I love this ----fairies,
we must keep them alive --what a fine
job you have done.

warmly,
netswan
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2 posted 05-15-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie~
Like it ?
I love it !

When little faeries
flit across the night
I am convinced
that everything
is more than alright !
~*Marge*~


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SpitFire
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3 posted 05-15-2000 08:40 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Tracie,...Fairies???....how could you not be tickled by their presence?....thank you for this sweet little read...I enjoyed it much.
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4 posted 05-15-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

tracie--

i LOVED this piece. faires are something magical indeed as are angels...i think we all wish at least once we could fly like that in the air. very descriptive poem that left me wanting to read more! great poem!

amy  

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Danny Holloway
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5 posted 05-15-2000 10:05 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Tracie, this is a very nice fairy "tale".
~~nicely done~~


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

tracie66
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6 posted 05-17-2000 06:37 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

netswan~
Thankyou   Yes we must, my daughter loves to read these even though she is getting past the age of believing.
Tracie~

Marge~
Lovely reply   thankyou
Tracie~

Spitfire~
Tickled yes indeed   glad you liked the read.
Tracie~

Amy~
I've always longed to fly and be free somewhat like my spirit. I love to write about fairies purely because of the fantasy and notion that some poeple truly do believe they exist and maybe they do, I certainly hope so  
Tracie~

Danny~
Thankyou   your comments are always appreciated.
Tracie~



 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Kit McCallum
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7 posted 05-17-2000 06:43 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I enjoyed this Tracy!  Such a happy and positive image ... you have kept the fairies alive, as they exist through your portrait so sweetly ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
tracie66
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Kit~
Thankyou for your wonderful reply. This is what I hope to do, keep them alive in peoples minds with words.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe




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Butterflies_dont_cry
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9 posted 05-18-2000 07:21 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Tracie* What a breathtaking picture you paint with these words you weave!

"You've got darling little angel wings that softly caress the night air
And sparkling dust of gold flows from your golden hair"

Awesome my friend!! **Angel Wing Hugs**



 The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams

~Eleanor Roosevelt~
kitkat
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Such a Happy poem  . Brings a smile to my face. Yes I believe. Nicely done.
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Tracie, you never get past the age of believing in angels and fairies. . . they're all around us. . .

Perhaps you know one. . .

Excellent poem. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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12 posted 05-18-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Great job Tracie

lovely fairies

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

tracie66
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Butterflies~
Thankyou for the angel wing hugs and I send then straight back to ya  
Thankyou for your kind words.
Tracie~

Kitkat~
To a believer glad to make you smile  
Tracie~

Sven~
Yes I do believe I do  
Tracie~

Jeffrey~
Thanks   my love back atcha.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Janet Marie
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14 posted 05-19-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

You've got darling little angel wings that softly caress the night air
And sparkling dust of gold flows from your golden hair

I've never seen anything as magical as you sweeping across the tree's
Hair of gold, wings of an angel caressing against the breeze


tracie...this is PERFECT!!
wonderful magical poem!!
love it
great writing, creative and imaginative.
jm
tracie66
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Janet Marie
THANK YOU lovely, kind words from you.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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