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Goodbye?

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Aimster
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0 posted 05-15-2000 04:27 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

Goodbye?
Amy Kennedy

I told you that I loved you and I never lied
But our being together and yet not really is tearing me apart
A million times a day I ask myself why
Why did I fall so completely in love with you....with all my heart

We know we're playing a game and someone's bound to get burned
This game of love is rough and cruel
Love can be sweet, and then suddenly get turned
You tell me I must live within the rule

You tell me to love you just for now and here
Saying that you love me, and I know it is true
But do you even realize my heart is breaking, as I let go a tear
Do you realize how much I do love you

But this isn't reality this is only a dream
We aren't to be together, I can feel it in my heart
And it hurts me so much it makes me want to scream
Because I never want to be apart

But I think its best, if I walk away
I will miss you always and love you forever
I will be thinking of you through the days
Hoping you find true love....but forget me never

You've taught me so much in such a short span
I found myself again, when I thought I never would
You been my love and my friend
But I cant do this no more...I don't think I can
I dont want to leave you, it tears me up inside
But I have no other choice, than to let u go and say goodbye.



 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~


[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 05-15-2000).]
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tracie66
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1 posted 05-15-2000 05:50 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Amy what you've said here is so brave, I wish you well and someday find true love and happiness.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Aimster
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2 posted 05-15-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Tracie--

thank you for the kind words. i too hope i find true love one day. take care and best wishes!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Janet Marie
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3 posted 05-15-2000 04:20 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

You've taught me so much in such a short span
I found myself again, when I thought I never would
You been my love and my friend
But I cant do this no more...I don't think I can
I dont want to leave you, it tears me up inside
But I have no other choice, than to let u go and say goodbye.

------------------

if you love some one and you set them free...
if they come back to you...
then its meant to be.
(or something like that)  
just keep asking your self all the right questions and give  your self time to find all the answers.
and BREATHE *smile*
most of trust your self...you've got a really good head on those shoulders...
listen to amy..head and heart...
all the rest will fall into place
loves ya, jm
Denise
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4 posted 05-15-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

It sounds like you trust your heart, that's good! Sometimes it is best to say goodbye. Very well expressed, Amy!

Denise
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5 posted 05-15-2000 06:12 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice poem!!!!!
CMGrimm
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6 posted 05-15-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

wow Amy....so passionate..

wonderfully written piece.

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


lorilockheart
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7 posted 05-15-2000 06:38 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

This really touched me so. Girl I have been there!  Thanks for writing my emotions in this one!
Lori


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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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vphantom
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8 posted 05-16-2000 02:46 AM       View Profile for vphantom   Email vphantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vphantom

oh my!!!!!!!  I can relate so much to the way you feel.  I am also looking for my true love, I thought I found it only to get played like a fool.  My prayers are with you.
Vphantom

-The face is the mirror of the mind but the
eyes confess the secrets of the heart.-
                            St. Jerome
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