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Away From the Night. . .

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Sven
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0 posted 05-15-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Lover of my soul, desire of my heart
Now that we're together, I never want to part
Writer of life's melody, singer of life's song
You are my home, the one I've sought for so long

Passionate and gentle lover, gentle and caring friend
You've helped my heart to heal, helped it to mend
Seeker of life's truth, knower of life's road
Let me join you on the journey, to help carry the load

Finder of life's answers, possessor of superior mind
You have taught me much, much you have helped me find
Holder of the candle, beacon of warm light
Help me to find the sun, take me away from the night. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-15-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

How romantic....I'm sure you can hear my sappy sighs over here....        This flows so smoothly, like a fine wine...your lucky lady must be proud.    

Christina =^..^=
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2 posted 05-15-2000 04:59 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

*sigh.......lovely sir.  
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3 posted 05-15-2000 08:33 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Aaahhh Sven,....this is beautiful in every sense of the word. *SIGH*
Marina
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4 posted 05-15-2000 12:54 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Beautifully soft and sensual...she is very lucky!!!

Marina
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5 posted 05-15-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven,
Lovely poem, my friend.  I truly hope you find that which you seek.  You deserve it.  Great writing...
LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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6 posted 05-15-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Truly beautiful.  I hope we can all find a love to take us away from the night.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~
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Romance at its best Sven.....I can hear the ladies knocking at the door now  

 A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her.


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8 posted 05-16-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sven, this is so lovely and romantic.
Just beautiful!  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


Marge Tindal
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9 posted 05-16-2000 07:40 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven~
To find this little gem tucked in
this beautiful poem ...
was more than enough ...

'Holder of the candle, beacon of warm light'

Beautiful thought.
~*Marge*~



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Sven
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10 posted 05-17-2000 12:55 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . . your words mean a lot. . .

And First Knight?  I can't hear them knocking. . . that must be your door!  

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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11 posted 05-17-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Sven--beautiful, lovely and romantic.
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12 posted 05-17-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Sven, wow, this lover of yours, she sounds wonderful!  She sounds like a dream come true!  I am so happy to see such warm and romantic writings from you of late!     Looks like the warm love bug bit us both about the same time, 'eh?  We're both writing the same 'ol sappy stuff!  hehehe  Glad to share the feeling with you!     You keep on writing 'em, and so will I !!  We can swap notes.  
Sven
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13 posted 05-17-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Gen,
    aren't we already?  

And I'll share anytime. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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