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Flutter-Bye (For Elizabeth Santos)

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Marge Tindal
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Flutter-Bye
~*Marge Tindal*~

If upon the wing of butterfly
you should happen to flutter by
I'd lead you to a rosy view
to keep in the crimson heart of you

If upon that petal you should sit
I'd watch with rapt delight
as the rainbow arch settled over you
and covered you until night

Then upon elfin wing
I'd softly sing my song
so all the world would realize
you were where you surely belong

On crimson petal of the rose
you'd sleep in endless dream
to meet the morning sunrise
with love of endless seem






 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 05-15-2000 03:39 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear Marge
What a wonderful fantasy you have portrayed here  
Liz will love this.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Marge Tindal
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Tracie~
Thank you, hon.
Elizabeth inspired it with her
'On Wing Of Butterfly'.
She's something else ... she is !
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 05-15-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is wonderfully written by a remarkable poet to another remarkable poet! I just know Liz'll love this one. I know that I could never not love what you write!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 05-15-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Marge,
This may have been inspired by "On Wing of Butterfly", but it came directly from your heart. And I thank you for this honor. You can't imagine how much it means to have such a lovely poem written to me. Thank you, dear friend
Love
Liz
Marge Tindal
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Lil' Lizzie~
Here I am ... surrounded by 'Lizzie's ..
lucky me !  Thank you sweetie.

Lizzie Lady~
You KNOW it means a lot to me to be inspired by you.  You are pretty special to this heart.

And, yes I do know ...  
Love you~
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 05-15-2000 07:59 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Marge* It's a wonderful feeling to be inspired by another...this is so beautiful just like the souls of the two women involved  
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7 posted 05-15-2000 09:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, very beautiful, Marge! Enchanting!

Denise
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Yep,

This one is a keeper... I think I'll steal a line or so OK... Naw, I takin' the whole thing... HA!



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
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9 posted 05-15-2000 09:33 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Marge, this has got to be one of my favorites, it is done so well with such sweet love for such wonderful person.  
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ButterfliesDC~
Thank you so much.  
Guess you could call us 'soul' sisters !  

Denise~
I do thank you.  Elizabeth does give 'enchanting' inspiration.

Lucky~
I am so glad that you like it.
ze_keeper has spoken !  

Martie~
Shucks, it just flew to the page in a heartbeat after I read Elizabeth's
'On Wing Of Butterfly' ...
She's still my little 'quipping' partner.
And God, how I love her.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge, what a beautiful vision you have given me! Thank you for sharing it.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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12 posted 05-15-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Lovely, Marge. What a delightful portrait you have paiinted upon this canvas.  

Christina =^..^=
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This poem sounds as though it came straight out of dream. Beautifully done.
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14 posted 05-16-2000 01:06 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Margi-girl,
this is PERFECT, one of my favs by you.
and inspiration that comes from reading a poem by another...thats the true gift of this special place and of poetry.
wonderful imagery here!
jm
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simply put i love this
Marge Tindal
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LoveBug~
Thank you, sweetheart.

BobbyCat~
I appreciate your thoughts.

SweetThing~
'A dream is a wish your heart makes'
I would wish beautiful inspiration like this for everyone.  Thank you.

JanetMarie~
I'm inspired each day by someone else's
thoughts ... Elizabeth is easy-inspiration.
Thank you.

Walt~
Simply put - thank you.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lovely  
Marge Tindal
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Hoot~
Thank you.  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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