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Such a tiny hole....

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The Jackal
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0 posted 05-15-2000 01:45 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

handle me with care they say...
i was broken...sanity has spoken
and arent you glad ..you painted me this way?
must not mind..the sound of decay
and the question goes...how does such a tiny hole
suck out whats left of me..
and leave you absent..but ALWAYS in control

 "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings
you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything"

"so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything"

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Lucius Cade
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That is quite a powerful poem and it certainly says alot, good work.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems
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