Open Poetry #7 |
My Precious Child |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My Precious Child ~*Marge Tindal*~ I gaze at you my precious child and cradle you close to me. I love you for the person you will become, not just who I want you to be. I will try my best to guide you and release you without a qualm. No matter where you go, you'll find my outstretched palm. As you gain your balance, I am not afraid to let you go. With the proper guidance planted, you will return, I know. I'll gently release your hand as you approach each new roads' bend. For God only made me your mother, YOU made me your friend. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Oh WOW!!!! The last lines of this one almost brought a tear to my eye! How sweet! This is awesome! Thank you Marge! --Dave "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Marge, this touched my heart, and the last two lines squeezed it!!! It is so beautiful!!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Happy Mother's Day, Mom....hugs to you |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marge, this is such a beautiful poem from a mothers heart. What a great mom you are, and a gifted poet too!!!! Ellie 02 |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
An exceptional poem Marge, very special, very touching. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Ohhhh, this one has made me so teary! Marge you are such a wonderful person and a very special mom too! You and your children are blessed to have each other. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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