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~Of the night and dawn~

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 05-15-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


~Of the night and dawn~


Sweet murmur
      of heaven, exhale and
give my body life
    let me become you
        become one with you

I, your night
        You, my dawn,
Oh, and how night melts
    into dawn and
   you my song at
         daybreak

the light wind of
   your breath whispers
  through my
          hair, of gently
     sounding leaves
Autumn blown

         drenched, rain fallen
I soak in a bath
      of your scent
            and absorb
                the intensity
of the night and dawn……

                          of us.

Dark Angel
2000
          


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge




[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-15-2000).]
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WhtDove
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1 posted 05-15-2000 12:29 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Woohoo girl! Sensual piece here!
You had me captured from the get go....
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 05-15-2000 12:53 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
This is sooooooo good !
It is just gosh-darned beautiful.

'Oh, and how night melts
    into dawn and
   you my song at
         daybreak'

I really enjoyed the way the two
blended into one.  Lovely vision.
~*Marge*~



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3 posted 05-15-2000 04:52 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is magical! I love it.  
tracie66
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4 posted 05-15-2000 05:32 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sooo romantic and sensual, very discriptive and flowed wonderfully  
This is great.
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


netswan
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5 posted 05-15-2000 08:21 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Oh Passions is burning with
beautifully done poetic passion.

This is great

netswan
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 05-15-2000 10:08 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Could certainly get a person swoooooooning with this one.
~~nice writing Dark Angel~~


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7 posted 05-15-2000 11:30 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Dark Angel, a big wow to this sensual writing. Its begs to be read many a time, for full intensity.

Parker
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Beautiful...
Dark Angel
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hehehe Angel Thank you glad you liked it.  
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Marge thank you, yes night and dawn, they must blend!   thanks again for your lovely comment.  
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Thanks Sharon   glad you love it. It means alot to me.
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Thank you Tracie   I appreciate your lovely comment.
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netswan so glad you enjoyed it, thank you  
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Why Thank you Danny  
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Hey Parker, thanks so very much  
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Thanks Sunshine  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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10 posted 05-15-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

DA: You romantic little devil, you!!..

HUSG
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11 posted 05-15-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Dark Angel,
Romance and mystery all in one!!!  I love it!!!  


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12 posted 05-15-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Dark Angel!

Denise
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 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)




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Dark Angel
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Hey Rainbow, thanks dear  
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Lone Wolf glad you like it  
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Denise, thanks again  


 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


hoot_owl_rn
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Oh my , oh my , oh my....this one leaves me breathless  
Dark Angel
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WOW, Ruth, thank you so much!! so glad you liked it.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
(unkown)


LadySofia
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17 posted 05-16-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for LadySofia   Email LadySofia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit LadySofia's Home Page   View IP for LadySofia

Dear Dark Angel,

Of the night and dawn so clear,
Together forever without fear,
Circling in endless cycles of love,
A parting sign from above.

Breathtaking! ^_^ LadySofia


 "To the innocent and ancient ones, the sparks which light our fires." ^_^ LadySofia
ellie LeJeune
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18 posted 05-16-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for ellie LeJeune   Email ellie LeJeune   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ellie LeJeune

"I soak in a bath of your scent"  How delicously sensual! Beautiful poem,,,, so romantic. Ellie

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Excellent work Dark Angel,I loved it.the feel of the whole poem was just beautiful.
Sven
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20 posted 05-17-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

mmmmmmmmm DA. . . this one I like very much. . . just drips with romance and sensuality. . . superb. . .

Excellent my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Martie
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This is wonderfully sensual..and beautifully done!
Kit McCallum
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22 posted 05-17-2000 05:28 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

WOW!  I loved this Dark Angel ... it just flowed with mystery and romance, beautiful poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Soul Sis...this is definitely one of the most beautiful, evocative poems you have written - it moves me deeply...

hugs
K
Elizabeth Santos
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24 posted 05-17-2000 07:18 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Maree,
This poem confirms the feelings I've had about you for a long time ..... a true poetic talent. This one deserves a standing ovation. It is simply wonderful, Maree.
Love
Liz
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