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~Of the night and dawn~
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~Of the night and dawn~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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~Of the night and dawn~ Sweet murmur of heaven, exhale and give my body life let me become you become one with you I, your night You, my dawn, Oh, and how night melts into dawn and you my song at daybreak the light wind of your breath whispers through my hair, of gently sounding leaves Autumn blown drenched, rain fallen I soak in a bath of your scent and absorb the intensity of the night and dawn…… of us. Dark Angel 2000 < !signature--> What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-15-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Woohoo girl! Sensual piece here! You had me captured from the get go.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ This is sooooooo good ! It is just gosh-darned beautiful. 'Oh, and how night melts into dawn and you my song at daybreak' I really enjoyed the way the two blended into one. Lovely vision. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is magical! I love it.  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sooo romantic and sensual, very discriptive and flowed wonderfully  This is great. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh Passions is burning with beautifully done poetic passion. This is great netswan |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Could certainly get a person swoooooooning with this one. ~~nice writing Dark Angel~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dark Angel, a big wow to this sensual writing. Its begs to be read many a time, for full intensity. Parker |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautiful... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hehehe Angel Thank you glad you liked it. ------------------- Marge thank you, yes night and dawn, they must blend! thanks again for your lovely comment. ------------------ Thanks Sharon glad you love it. It means alot to me.------------------ Thank you Tracie I appreciate your lovely comment.------------------- netswan so glad you enjoyed it, thank you ----------------- Why Thank you Danny ----------------- Hey Parker, thanks so very much ----------------- Thanks Sunshine What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: You romantic little devil, you!!.. HUSG |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Dark Angel, Romance and mystery all in one!!! I love it!!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Dark Angel! Denise |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
< !signature--> Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 05-16-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Rainbow, thanks dear -------------- Lone Wolf glad you like it -------------- Denise, thanks again Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh my , oh my , oh my....this one leaves me breathless |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW, Ruth, thank you so much!! so glad you liked it. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Dear Dark Angel, Of the night and dawn so clear, Together forever without fear, Circling in endless cycles of love, A parting sign from above. Breathtaking! ^_^ LadySofia "To the innocent and ancient ones, the sparks which light our fires." ^_^ LadySofia |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
"I soak in a bath of your scent" How delicously sensual! Beautiful poem,,,, so romantic. Ellie 02 |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
Excellent work Dark Angel,I loved it.the feel of the whole poem was just beautiful. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
mmmmmmmmm DA. . . this one I like very much. . . just drips with romance and sensuality. . . superb. . . Excellent my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is wonderfully sensual..and beautifully done! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
WOW! I loved this Dark Angel ... it just flowed with mystery and romance, beautiful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Soul Sis...this is definitely one of the most beautiful, evocative poems you have written - it moves me deeply... hugs K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Maree, This poem confirms the feelings I've had about you for a long time ..... a true poetic talent. This one deserves a standing ovation. It is simply wonderful, Maree. Love Liz |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW,I'd like to thank each and everyone of you wonderful poets so very much for your kind words and compliments. I do appreciate them so, and for taking the time to read. Thank you! *hugs* Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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