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Angelic Love
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Angelic Love |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Angelic Love The sky opened up and his angel love washed over me He looked at me and from the darkness...I was free His touch transported me to heaven and back He transformed me and my stone heart began to crack He washed away the pain and sins of the past And promised me a perfect love that would forever last I swore I had been touched clear to my soul An angelic man that made me heavenly whole The sky re-opened and with a tear my angel did depart And that is how an Angel healed my broken heart |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
Beautiful work here. Maybe I need one of those angels... my heart's not stone, but it's a little stiff. =) "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment. Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful!!!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what a lovely combination... angel and butterfly wings... cant do any better than that... with the exception perhaps of... angel wing hugs and butterfly kisses *smile* you KNOW I love this one... its perfect!  loves ya me SS jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sweet butterflies~ This was soo beautiful and touching. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~enjoyed the read~~and nice graphic also Good creative writing i feel. dh |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Holly~ My dear, doesn't transformation feel wonderful? I have to say, I love this poem. My stone heart began to crack not too long ago, and it was thanks to you, and Marge, and Ruth, and Janet Marie, and Jeffrey, and all the other wonderful friends that I have met here at Passion's Place. You have all been my Angels Love Ya~ "Angels Never came down There's No One here They want to hang around, But if they knew, If they knew YOU at all, Then one by one the Angels The Angels would fall." ------"Angels Would Fall" by Melissa Etheridge. ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How lovely!! Could you send that Angel my way?  |
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lorilockheart Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 206Alabama |
This is so beautiful, and I am so glad you're here. I love your work - all of it. Please keep it up. Lori ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Thank you to each and everyone of you, I'm blessed to have people like you in my life, not just a nickname on a screen but a living breathing person that cares...thank you from the bottom of my heart for all of your kindness and encouragement. **Angel Wing Hugs** |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 I double clicked so I might as well give you all a butterfly kiss too [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 05-15-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is superb, my friend!!! The imagery is just heavenly and well who can resist a broken heart being healed. Gives me hope. Thanks for sharing it. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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