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Angelic Love

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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0 posted 05-15-2000 12:13 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry



Angelic Love

The sky opened up and his angel love washed over me
He looked at me and from the darkness...I was free

His touch transported me to heaven and back
He transformed me and my stone heart began to crack

He washed away the pain and sins of the past
And promised me a perfect love that would forever last

I swore I had been touched clear to my soul
An angelic man that made me heavenly whole

The sky re-opened and with a tear my angel did depart
And that is how an Angel healed my broken heart

© Copyright 2000 Butterflies_dont_cry - All Rights Reserved
WhiteNite
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1 posted 05-15-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for WhiteNite   Email WhiteNite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhiteNite's Home Page   View IP for WhiteNite

Beautiful work here.  Maybe I need one of those angels... my heart's not stone, but it's a little stiff. =)

 "Don't let your character get camoflaged with your environment.
Find who you are and let it stay in its true colors." --Rachel Joy Scott


Dark Angel
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2 posted 05-15-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Beautiful!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Janet Marie
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3 posted 05-15-2000 02:52 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

what a lovely combination...
angel and butterfly wings...
cant do any better than that...
with the exception perhaps of...
angel wing hugs and butterfly kisses *smile*
you KNOW I love this one...
its perfect!  
loves ya me SS
jm


 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


tracie66
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4 posted 05-15-2000 05:37 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sweet butterflies~
This was soo beautiful and touching.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Danny Holloway
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5 posted 05-15-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

~~enjoyed the read~~and nice graphic also
Good creative writing i feel.
dh
TerryW
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6 posted 05-15-2000 02:46 PM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Holly~
     My dear, doesn't transformation feel wonderful?  I have to say, I love this poem.  My stone heart began to crack not too long ago, and it was thanks to you, and Marge, and Ruth, and Janet Marie, and Jeffrey, and all the other wonderful friends that I have met here at Passion's Place.  You have all been my Angels    

Love Ya~


"Angels
Never came down
There's No One here
They want to hang around,
But if they knew,
If they knew YOU at all,
Then one by one the Angels
The Angels would fall."
------"Angels Would Fall" by Melissa Etheridge.

 ~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Poet deVine
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7 posted 05-15-2000 05:22 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

How lovely!! Could you send that Angel my way?  
lorilockheart
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8 posted 05-15-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

This is so beautiful, and I am so glad you're here.  I love your work - all of it.

Please keep it up.  

Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Butterflies_dont_cry
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9 posted 05-15-2000 07:10 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


Thank you to each and everyone of you, I'm blessed to have people like you in my life, not just a nickname on a screen but a living breathing person that cares...thank you from the bottom of my heart for all of your kindness and encouragement. **Angel Wing Hugs**
Butterflies_dont_cry
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10 posted 05-15-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I double clicked so I might as well give you all a butterfly kiss too  

[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 05-15-2000).]
Lone Wolf
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11 posted 05-15-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

This is superb, my friend!!!  The imagery is just heavenly and well who can resist a broken heart being healed.  Gives me hope.  Thanks for sharing it.  

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
 
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