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gnosis
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0 posted 05-14-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for gnosis   Email gnosis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit gnosis's Home Page   View IP for gnosis

i am inside sugarland and trapped
i wonder how to escape
i hear them laughing
i see their fingers pointed at me
i want to be somewhere else or nowhere at all
i am inside sugarland and trapped

i pretend i'm unhappy
i feel wonderful here
i touch nothing
i worry about leaving
i cry when i see it from afar
i am inside sugarland and trapped

i understand that sugarland as a whole is a hole
i say i need to leave
i dream of escape
i try to escape
i hope to leave
i am inside sugarland and trapped
© Copyright 2000 jason - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 05-14-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

wow gnosis son of doreen very good first post keep it up its exciting to see the mind of a great poet and her offspring too
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
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2 posted 05-14-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions, Gnosis YOU have
a great mom  -- what a fun poem.
Glad to meet you!

Keep on writing!

netswan
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3 posted 05-15-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Wow.   Challenge well met I think, and very interesting I must say.   I hope to see more from you.

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
Aimster
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4 posted 05-15-2000 04:36 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

This was a clever response to the challenge. Was a fun read....nice meeting you. Take care and hope you post more of your work!

Take care,
AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Poet deVine
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5 posted 05-15-2000 04:57 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very interesting, I like your style. Welcome to the Passions family...please check your email for a special welcome.  
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6 posted 05-15-2000 07:49 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Gnosis~

'i want to be somewhere else or nowhere at all'

Sometimes, it's a 'nowhere' kind of day !
Been there and will probably visit again !

Enjoyed your first post ... welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~





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Nan
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7 posted 05-16-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Hello, J..... Nice to see you again.. .. Few of our Passionate folks know what a good poet you are, because they weren't with us in the "day of the blue page"... hehe... I'd really like to see you post more - You've got the rhythm, ya know???.. Keep 'em coming, my friend...
gnosis
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8 posted 05-16-2000 10:53 AM       View Profile for gnosis   Email gnosis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit gnosis's Home Page   View IP for gnosis

thanks for all the nice responses! i really appreciate the welcoming. and thanks to you Nan! i may write some more to post on here. everyone can check out my site http://members.aol.com/jasonschm/ i've got some lyrics on there..
unfortunately you can't TRULY enjoy my poem unless you live in sugarland.. it's funny and sarcastic and true and serious all at once... i guess it's one of those "you have to be there..." type things... but thanks for understanding hehe
SpitFire
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9 posted 05-16-2000 12:42 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Hey there,..I've read this one over a few times now....truly enjoyed it.  Great post.
*I am inside sugarland and trapped*  
Coolness what ever that may TRULY be.hehe.
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