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Will the real Justin Kace kindly stop makin his own bubbles in the hot tub...by walt

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 05-14-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

I’d have put this in the Alley
But then my mind would have froze
Cuz I just can’t seem to relate
Anything plausible in prose

So here is my weirdo story
It happened two nights ago
In another town far away
The family reunion yuh know

Sitting crowded in the hot tub
Making intros to some strangers
They’d been telling us wild stories
Of their lives of mighty danger

It was my turn to say my name
To these loud and drunk vaqueros
In response to "wayoutwalt" one said
Something predicted in the tarots

He said "if you are wayoutwalt
Nice to meet you my names Justin"
But when he said "that’s Justin Kace"
My sides were really bustin

I swelled with pride to think that he
Compared me to ole Justin Kace
But dear friends fantasy ends
With coincidence on his face


ok this is a true story when the guy said if your wayoutwalt then im justin...justin kace yuh he said if your wayoutwalt with such reverence that i thought wow he knows my works but yuh he was just bein silly guy o boo what was i gonna say so how do you like the sonnet versus the villanelle??? there was women present yuh know!!


 The doctor said, "You're almost dead.
Don't eat green bananas no more."
The sick little monkey groaned and said,
"But that's what I 1-2 the 3-4."
from The Monkey--Shel Silverstein
© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Justin Thyme
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1 posted 05-14-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Justin Thyme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Thyme

You say you met my brother?
Just soaking in in the suds?
Somehow that don't suprise me...
I'm glad that you're now Buds!

I can't believe you met him!
This thing is too bizarre!
So if you see him once again,
please tell him where we are.

I mean, our personalities
are taking up my mind...
I'm so confused, I don't quite know
what where or how I'll find...

My brother, Justin Kace, you see,
has been so lost in space
he doesn't know where he has been
or how he found that place!

It is indeed a mystery
how Kace met you last night.
Somehow this story seems too true...
I know it must be right!!

signed, JT. that's me
WhtDove
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2 posted 05-14-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

ROFL Walt!  Go figure, Justin Kase! You should have asked him if he's ever been to Passions. LOL

I bet that was funny, and I'd have liked to see the look on your face when he said that  
netswan
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3 posted 05-15-2000 03:21 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

LOL Walt -- hey, great poem --

I too would have liked to see the
reverence on his face - -maybe you
should have invited him to this place--)

Cute Justin Thyme --)

netswan
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4 posted 05-17-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Walt, How funny just imagine if someone had said they were Nurse Crachet...LOL I think you would be running then. Great poem I enjoyed your interesting adventure.  
Denise
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5 posted 05-17-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wow, talk about a coincidence, that would have freaked me out!

Denise
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