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fool
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0 posted 05-14-2000 10:12 PM       View Profile for fool   Email fool   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for fool

In my tears
you'll find a solid gold locket,
reach out
take it
put in your pocket
and you can keep me always.

In my smile
you'll find carved figurines,
just take the smoothest one
the one with a life of its own,
place it on your mantle
and I'll smile to you at night.

In my hand
you'll find a starlings feather,
its soft against your cheek
put it in your hair
and I will touch you always.

In my eyes
you'll find a portal
fall in
fall through
and you'll become
a part of me
and together
we shall see.


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Dark Angel
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1 posted 05-15-2000 12:46 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

I liked this very much. Lovely, well done!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Lucius Cade
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2 posted 05-15-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Yes it is a very interesting poem. Loved it.

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3 posted 05-15-2000 04:54 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent poem....you are no fool when it comes to poetry!  
tracie66
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4 posted 05-15-2000 06:13 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

I'm impressed, you are obviously no FOOL.
Great poem, well done  
Tracie~


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5 posted 05-15-2000 07:52 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Fool~
I'm convinced that only a 'fool'
could write thoughts as lovely as this.

'In my hand
you'll find a starlings feather,
its soft against your cheek
put it in your hair
and I will touch you always.'

Greatly enjoyed.
~*Marge*~



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