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With You

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Bunny
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With You

You were my guiding light,
Myshelter from the storm.
You were my laughter,
My surprise.
But then you started fading,
Without telling me why.
You didn't want to worry me,
You didn't think I could take that secret.
They took you from me,
Laughing all the way.
They cut into your soul, and shut out all your light
They don't know what they've done,
What they did to me and you.
Now you have left me,
You thought there was nothing you could do.
I miss you too much now,
I want to be with you.
I have to end this pain and hurt,
I must go now too.

~This poem is about a girl who looses her best friend, her only friend to suicide.


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netswan
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1 posted 05-14-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Bunny a sad tale --


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lorilockheart
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Bunny,

This is so powerful and sad.  You have expressed such raw emotions.  

Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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