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When I'm With You

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Aimster
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0 posted 05-14-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

When I'm With You
Amy M Kennedy

When I'm with you, there's no place I'd rather be
In your loving arms is the only place for me
Feeling the passion of your kiss sets my soul on fire
Making me want and need you, the flames of desire

When I'm with you my soul is free to fly
I let out a happy contented sigh
Your soft touch sets my mind at ease
I pray that our love never has to cease

When I'm with you, I lose all concetration
With you, is my ony destination
You are in my heart today and forever more
But I am scared to dream what our future has in store

I know that you love me, that is clear to see
And when I'm with you...you bring out the best in me
In soft moonlight I want to hold you tight
Hoping that forever we can hold onto the night

When I'm with you, my heart skips a beat
And I am consumed with flames of intense burning heat
However, it is more than just physical that I feel
I know that I love you...and when I'm with you it is so real


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-14-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Very nice poem.I like it.
devina
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2 posted 05-14-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Sounds like you've found what we all dream of girl!! Hold on tight and just be happy!!!  Beautiful feelings too btw!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Tom26
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3 posted 05-14-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for Tom26   Email Tom26   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tom26

I really liked this poem. Never let go of what you have here.

                    -Tom


 Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like nobody's watching- Anonymus
JamesMichael
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4 posted 05-14-2000 07:16 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"When I'm with You"...I loved your title and I wish that I could honestly write a poem like this...with every word true..."In soft moonlight I want to hold you tight"....so many times I have wanted to feel all these feelings and to know that the woman I am with feels the same feelings for me.   James
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5 posted 05-14-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Aimster,
        great poem. . . we should all have the feelings that you have. . . I feel that we all want them. . . so glad that you have found something that makes you happy. . .

Excellent poem!!

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--Victor Frankl

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6 posted 05-14-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~I would like to thank you for sharing this...it sounds so wonderful and comforting.  You write beautifully.
lorilockheart
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7 posted 05-14-2000 08:24 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Amy,
I will admit I envy such passion and deep emotion.  If this is your reality - hang on!
Love this one.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Butterflies_dont_cry
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Amy* You write with such grace and elegance, this is beautiful. It's a blessing to be with someone who makes everything else just go away so that you can just live "the moment".  **hugs**
doreen peri
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9 posted 05-14-2000 09:53 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Amy, this is very lovely!! You should add some artwork or a photo or something and put this on a card to give to your friend... it's lovely, really!
Aimster
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10 posted 05-14-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Thanks everyone for your sweet replies!! You guys are the best!

Love,
Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Janet Marie
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11 posted 05-14-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

mmm mmm mmm
makes me wanna kiss somebody LOL
you know Im smiling from ear to ear now..right?
excellent writing here Amy...
somethings just inspires us to new heights.
(you know of course I want DETAILS!!)
kidding--just-- kidding (NOT) LOL
loves ya, jm
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12 posted 05-15-2000 06:53 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Amy~
Very passionately felt.
This is such a look at your heart.
Nice view, hon.
~*Marge*~


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Aimster
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13 posted 05-15-2000 09:46 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Thanks EVERYBODY for your sweet replies to my poem. You guys really know how to make a girl SMILE   Y'all are the best! Love you

Amy  

P.S. I might not say it much...but whenever someone takes the time to read my work or to respond...it touches me greatly. I humbly thank you!

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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14 posted 05-15-2000 06:17 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

This is great Amy....if only I could ever find a friend such as you.... (sigh)

(staring off into space)

thanks for a great read...

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


vphantom
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15 posted 05-16-2000 02:53 AM       View Profile for vphantom   Email vphantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vphantom

I love your work, it makes me wish that someone would write something like that for me or actually feel that way towards me.  Sigh....I can only dream.

Vphantom

-The face is the mirror of the mind and the
eyes confess the secrets of the heart.-
                             St. Jerome
          


 
Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 05-16-2000 05:46 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Of course, you can loose your concentration when you're not with him, too. hehe. But you said it just the way it is,.... perfectly
Liz
Kit McCallum
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17 posted 05-16-2000 05:51 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This was beautifully written Amy, heartfelt and loving sentiments ... a wonderful and uplifting poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit
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