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Honeybee
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~*RAIN SONG HAIKU*~

5-7-5

Rain's graceful lyric
carefree in spirit it sings
God's soothing love song

By Melissa Honeybee

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-14-2000 05:10 PM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

Beautiful Haiku...so much said in so few words!  

~Kelly


 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill


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I love your poem.!!!!!!
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~Mmmm,...beautiful. Simply marvelous.  
Dennis L. White
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4 posted 05-15-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Dennis L. White   Email Dennis L. White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dennis L. White

Melissa,
  This is a terrific Haiku! Well done!
              Dennis :^)


  Moonbeams radiate
As the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance!

D.L.White :^)

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Lovely!

Corinne
Honeybee
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Thank you all for the kind replies.  I just love writing haikus and senryus.  This is one of my favourites that I have written because there is just something so calming and soothing about rain. Instead of seeing rain and the storm that follows as a bitter force of nature, I choose to see it as beautiful

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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Melissa~
You KNOW I love this.
I agree with you on the gentle fall of the rain ... not too keen on those violent downpours though.

As I type this ... the gentlest of rains is pitter-pattering on the roof ... romancing the window pane.

Whoa !  LOOK WHAT I FOUND !

A gentle rain falls
Romancing the window pane
Softly comes the rain

~*Marge*~




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Honeybee
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Thanks for replying Marge, I knew that I could count on you to reply.  And the haiku that you wrote was simply perfect!  Thanks for writing it!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee
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You do these very well, Melissa! This is beautiful!

Denise
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another winner
i like rain too...i am one of those who choose to stroll in the rain,letting it cleanse my bitter soul while others scurry and hurry to fing shelter
 
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