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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 05-14-2000 04:01 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Strange enzyme

Chaos
a camel
wondering over
sands time
Sipping
lifes juice
an oasis
enzyme.
Chaos
pandoras box
Gods
absolute change
grinding
infinity
to
strange.

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SpitFire
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1 posted 05-14-2000 07:39 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Hhhmmm,...very interesting.  Certainly got my mind thinking.  Thanks for posting such an intriguing little poem.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 05-14-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

SpitFire,
Thanks for posting a comment.
Danny Holloway
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3 posted 05-15-2000 10:27 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This is different and interesting.  I like poetry that stops me and makes me think and re-read.  This one did for sure.
~~nice writing~~

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Sunshine
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4 posted 05-15-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I've never viewed chaos in a camel before, but Pandora's box, well, that opens up an interesting discussion...LOL!  Enjoyed, Sy, enjoyed!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Corinne
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5 posted 05-15-2000 11:40 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Fantastic, Seymour.  I love the way your mind works.

Corinne
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 05-15-2000 11:55 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

If the surrounding times and sands are strange to the spirit
What is left is to keep peace with ourselves and with those we love. An oasis garden of soul's comfort.
Interesting thoughts put in words that only you could write
Liz
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 05-15-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Danny, If I made you think then the poem is a success. Thank you.

Sunshine, Only a camel coud walk for any period on sands time. Glad you enjoyed. *L*

Corinne, What you said made me happy. *L*

Elizabeth, And an answer only you could write
Love Sy
 
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