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Slashed soul
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0 posted 05-14-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for Slashed soul   Email Slashed soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Slashed soul

Hour glass figure to die for,
she counts the seconds down, relentlessly.
complexion so clear, and faultless,
she moves inside, golden and fine.
I can turn her upside down, and she never complains,
just sits there silently, doing what she does best.


.....eggtimers are not all the same....

-Rich- (lol)

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SpitFire
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~Ppffttt...LOL....very clever of you.  Great post.
brian madden
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2 posted 05-14-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Hour glass figure to die for,
she counts the seconds down, relentlessly.
complexion so clear, and faultless,
she moves inside, golden and fine.
I can turn her upside down, and she never complains,
just sits there silently, doing what she does best.

.....eggtimers are not all the same....

I would like to express how much I loved this poem but I can think of are a string over used words but believe me I mean them,
great poem, intense, stunning images,
every line is sharp and powerful. Brilliantly written.

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