»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #7
»
Backyard Haiku
| Open Poetry #7 |
|
Backyard Haiku |
|
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
|
Magpie forages, regal in black and white stripes, treasuring garbage. Fat squirrel slaps tail, chirping territorial, balances on wire. Old oak tree stands broad, strong and stately yet fragile, home to woodpeckers. Rotting swing hanging, echoes of children’s laughter, long ago singing. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Corinne - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Wonderfull Haiku, I really liked the meaning in the last one. Reminds me of an artist that paints with ghost shadows, memories of the past. Parker |
||
|
brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful and haunting, that was an amazing hiaku |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Parker and Brian. Corinne |
||
|
bobbycat Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 233USA |
I agree with Parker--that last Haiku was really visual, really got me. I love this one.  Christina =^..^= |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Christina. Corinne |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ This is just wonderful ! You've captured the very essence of Haiku. I happen to be very fond of this piece. Wonderful images spring to life. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh Corrine, I didn't know a a haiku could be done in stanzes. I love this. This puts a new light on Haikus for me. Full of imagery. netswan |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Marge, I've always loved Hiaku, but find it is most challenging to write, to say a lot with so little and to have some element of nature and surprise. Thanks, Netswan, well, technically, they are four separate Haiku! Corinne |
||
|
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Corinne, These are great, you've captured special moments in verse and have shared your vision so well! The fourth Haiku really shouts images at me! WELL DONE! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate As the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance! D.L.White :^) |
||
|
RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
lovely, engaging Haiku, Corinne. the magpie calls. Let's fix that swing. Rick |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You do these very well, Corinne! Denise |
||
|
kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
cool images you have here...how i wish i can get to see these delightful things in my backyard too |
||
|
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Dennis, glad you enjoyed! RAM, yes, let's. Denise and Kaile, thank you! Corinne |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
