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She's Crying Today

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SpitFire
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0 posted 05-14-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SpitFire

~She's Crying Today~

Feelings of sadness surround
pink tears falling to the ground
empty sighs released
attempts to mend ceased.

~She's Crying Today~

Alone by the shore
thoughts of now wanting more
hands holding head in distress
feelings of guilt for being careless

~She's Crying Today~

Other plans got in the way
but what could be more special then Mother's Day?
Cries of choices made
memories of smiles continue to fade.

~She's Crying Today~


*About my Mother and what she did this morning.


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1 posted 05-14-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Oh how this rings loudly of sadness and disappointment, SpitFire.  So sorry to hear of the morning you have had.  I hope that the rest of the day goes much better for you.  Glad that you could write about it at least...always helps.  Nice expression.
Take care,
LW


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2 posted 05-14-2000 01:41 PM       View Profile for Lucius Cade   Email Lucius Cade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucius Cade

Yes this is a very sad poem indeed. It was a great read though.

 Lucidity is the answer to all problems
SpitFire
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3 posted 05-14-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Thanks you two for reading and replying.  I appreciate the time you've taken. Take care.
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4 posted 05-14-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Spitfire, I'm sorry that things have not gone well for you or your mother this day. . .

I'm glad that you were able to put it all down and get it out. . .that's important. . .

Take care my friend. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

doreen peri
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5 posted 05-14-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

give her a big hug, wipe her tears away... moms need that...

well done, spitfire... thank you for sharing this. clearly, you have a talent for illustrating the world with words...
dp
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Spitfire~

I'm sorry to here about your morning.  But one thing that I know is that mothers will always love you, no matter what.  Take care.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
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~Sven....thank you for your concern,...you are a kind friend.  I appreciate you.

~DP...Thank you for reading,..thank you for your more than nice compliment

~Dawn,...thank you for reading and responding.  And thank you for your kind words.
insect
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8 posted 05-14-2000 08:16 PM       View Profile for insect   Email insect   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for insect

This is certainly a beautiful poem maybe next year things will be different  
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9 posted 05-14-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

SpitFire,
Sad but good words, well done, enjoyed.
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10 posted 05-15-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

SpitFire~
Hugs for you and your mom.
The tears that fall from a mother's eyes
always catch us in surprise ...
just hug her !
~*Marge*~



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