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Forgiveness

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Bunny
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0 posted 05-14-2000 09:57 AM       View Profile for Bunny   Email Bunny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bunny

Forgiveness

Once I was loved
But loved turned to rage
And I caused you pain that day
But I never allowed myself to admit it
You were my friend, my comfort, my protection
And yet I stabbed you with stinging words
How could I?
I suppose I was jelouse
But now I am forgiven
Forgiveness is only offered if there is true friendship
So now you are my friend, my comfort, my protection
So many feelings flow over me now,
And yet all I am able to say are two little words
But theses two words have the power to heal the deepest wounds of the heart
I simply have to say

I'm sorry.....

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Kellsue
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since 05-06-2000
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1 posted 05-14-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

Wonderful Bunny...those two little words are often the hardest to say.  Well done!

~Kelly


 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill


SpitFire
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2 posted 05-14-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Bunny,...I have to say that out of the couple of poems that you have posted I am impressed.  Your work just speaks from the heart,...it's so real...so touching.  *Bravo*
David2
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3 posted 05-14-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for David2   Email David2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for David2

Bunny,
   Very precise and concise. I liked it .
                David2
JamesMichael
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4 posted 05-14-2000 07:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I enjoyed reading this...sometimes those are the only words we want to hear...and they never come...or they come when it is too late.    James
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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5 posted 05-14-2000 09:06 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Bunny, indeed, these two words can stick in one's throat, but they are the honey that heals broken hearts back together.  Good work.


 The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.

 
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