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Star light. . .

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Sven
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0 posted 05-14-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

star light
star bright
send the love
i seek tonight

twinkle twinkle
little star
together is where
our hearts are

i wish i may
i wish i might
feel her love
my heart's light

up above
the world so high
her diamond smile
makes me sigh

star light
star bright
send the love
i seek tonight

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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1 posted 05-14-2000 01:55 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Awwwww......how totally SWEET!!! Just rolls off the tongue; thanks for lifting my spirit tonight!  

Christina =^..^=
tracie66
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2 posted 05-14-2000 02:15 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sven~
Just so lovely  hope you find the one you seek.
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Lone Wolf
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Sven...hope you find that which you seek, my friend.  You deserve it.  Great writing...
LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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4 posted 05-14-2000 03:43 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Sven~~

That was beautiful.  Comparing love to the stars is wonderful, for they both have their own beauty.     Nicely done.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 05-14-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sven,
Very clever, Enjoyed the read.
SpitFire
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~Sven,...you crafty little devil,..this is great.
devina
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I think even your star is blushing with this one dear... *sweet* I've got my fingers crossed for you!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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8 posted 05-14-2000 06:07 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Beautiful poem.I like your poem very much!!!!!
Sven
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9 posted 05-14-2000 07:23 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all for your words and for taking the time to reply. . . as always, your words are very encouraging. . .

Thank you!!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Sven--

This was beautiful as always hon!! Gosh I am such an admirer of your work! You write with such passion. Whomever the lucky lady is who lands your heart...I hope she makes you very happy and vice versa! I got my fingers crossed for you.

Take care,
Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
lorilockheart
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11 posted 05-14-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

I love this spin on the old lullaby.  You are truly such a romantic, and I love reading your work.  It is inspiring to see such loving, touching words come from a masculine heart.
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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Twinkle Twinkle little star,
Grant this wish from afar,
Starlight, starbright,
Grant Sven's wish tonight.

Grant him the love he seeks,
Let true love shine through,
For I can think of no one more deserving,
Allow his dreams to come true.

Double wishes, double luck?  Hope the wish comes true my friend, and a double wish won't hurt!! Can only help...  


 At last I have heard the song of enlightenment.... In your heart you can hear it now, if you listen....
It is the song your spirit has been singing since the moment of your birth. All lasting victories are won in the heart....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Sven
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13 posted 05-15-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Aimster,
        thank you so much for your reply, I am glad that you enjoy reading me so much. . . and thank you. . .

Lori,
     been a Romantic all of my life. . . but I'm not the only one around here. . . thank you. . .

Isis,
     thank you for your poetic reply my friend. . .and a double wish couldn't hurt. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Dark Angel
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14 posted 05-15-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh Sven this is truly lovely   enjoyed the read. Hope you find the one you seek.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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