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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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0 posted 2000-05-14 01:18 AM




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 06-01-2000).]
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Tom26
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since 2000-05-07
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1 posted 2000-05-14 03:10 AM


This is a really great poem. So skillfully written.

                       -Tom


 Work like you don't need the money, love like you've never been hurt, and dance like nobody's watching- Anonymus

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2000-05-14 07:26 PM


You have written well of a day that was full of many wonderful and yet sad memories for you.  Take care.  James
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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3 posted 2000-05-14 07:31 PM


~I have to be honest with you,...this is my third time reading this and I am still hesitant to reply,..the reason being is that it's so sad a tale and at the same time some wonderful things took place...Memories were made and time well spent.  I truly enjoy this piece but thought that my simple words would just not be enough.  Thank you,...from the bottom of my heart for sharing this.
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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4 posted 2000-05-14 09:40 PM


My dear friend, sometimes it is so hard to find the words, although you have certainly found the ones to move my heart again, like you always seem to...you know, maybe just hello would be enough...and there is always love.  Hugs!
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