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You Mean the World to Me

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Kellsue
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0 posted 05-13-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kellsue


You mean the world to me
By Kelly

You brighten my life
like sunshine on cloudy gray days.

You touch my soul with gentle kindness
like the soft breeze whistling through the shady trees.

You awaken in me, mischief
like the unpredictable whirling of a hurricane.

You bring to me such a comfort
like the peaceful silence of a sleepy calm lake.

You dream with me beautiful dreams
like the magnificence of a beautiful vast mountain before you.

You recognize life's little gifts with me
like the simple beauty of a rainbow.

You show me love that warms my heart
like carefree days, with one you love, in a sunny warm meadow.

You share craziness, spontaneity and fun with me
like diving into a vibrant pile of leaves on a majestic autumn day.

You shower me with happiness
like a child’s excited face gazing at Santa’s gifts on Christmas morning.

You ignite in me a spark that makes me feel alive
like an eagle soaring high above the earth in the wind.

You warm me with a feeling of content
like the "happily ever after" at the end of a fairy tale.

You make me feel special
like the rarest diamond in the entire world.

If ever given the chance, I think…

You would complete me
like the last missing piece in an intricate jigsaw puzzle
like the kiss at the end of a wedding ceremony
like the Amen at the end of a prayer…



 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill




[This message has been edited by Kellsue (edited 05-13-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Kelly S. McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 05-13-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, this is beautiful, Kelly.  There is someone out there for everyone who "completes" them I feel.  Hopefully you have found yours.  


Michael
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2 posted 05-14-2000 12:12 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Kelly,
This really is wonderful.  I hope you find the missing piece to your heart, my friend.  You deserve it!!  Great writing!!  
LW


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
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Kellsue
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3 posted 05-14-2000 10:07 AM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

Michael ~ Thank you for your kind words, they mean so much coming from such a wonderful poet.

Lone Wolf ~ Thank you my friend, I hope you find what you need to complete your heart also!

Thank you both for stopping by!

~Kelly


 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill


Kit McCallum
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4 posted 05-14-2000 10:14 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

So picturesque and beautifully written Kelly. This flowed from start to end with lovely imagery ... thank you for the wonderful read ...

Best wishes,
/Kit
SpitFire
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5 posted 05-14-2000 10:45 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Kelly,...what a read...loved it.  Your descriptions so vividly written...your message so heartfelt.  *Take care.
Dawn Eclipse
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6 posted 05-14-2000 03:35 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Wow!  That was beautiful.

"You make me feel special like the rarest diamond in the entire world "

That's pretty special I thinks..

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
lorilockheart
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7 posted 05-14-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

We all have someone that completes us.  I hope you have found yours.

"If ever given the chance, I think…

You would complete me
like the last missing piece in an intricate jigsaw puzzle
like the kiss at the end of a wedding ceremony
like the Amen at the end of a prayer…"

These are beautiful words.  I loved it.
Lori



 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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8 posted 05-15-2000 07:03 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

KellSue~
Oh, I do like this.

'like the Amen at the end of a prayer…'

Amen !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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netswan
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9 posted 05-15-2000 08:06 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Oh Kelly -
what a creative poem
using similies  OH I
do love this!

netswan
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