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rene
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0 posted 05-13-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for rene   Email rene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for rene

please believe me
the creatures inside me
moved me,
hold me
in your arms

please forget me
they will get me
change me
break me
let me go

nobody but me
can stop me
turn me
help me

no one gets out of here alive
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1 posted 05-13-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a beautiful poem.  Very true  at times for all of us.  No one can stop us but ourselves.     Nicely said.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
doreen peri
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2 posted 05-13-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

damn!! powerful... love it... honesty bleeds all over it
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