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Sven
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0 posted 05-13-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Sing on storm
Let your strength show
          the power of my love

Flash lightning bright
Shine with the fullness
          and illumination of my love

Sound thunder pure
Speak with the passion
          and story of my love

Touch wind strong
Caress with the tenderness
          and gentleness of my love

Flow rain living
Cleanse with the softness
          and silkiness of my love

Sing on storm
Let all of these show
          the depth of my love

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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SpitFire
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1 posted 05-13-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

*Sing on storm
Let all of these show
      the depth of my love.

~How clever a concept,...how beautiful a poem....nicely done Sven.
serenity blaze
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2 posted 05-13-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Hi Sveetie---this is one of my favorite themes and you touched on it beautifully!
Eloquent as always!  Hugs atchya.
Dawn Eclipse
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3 posted 05-13-2000 09:55 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a wonderful poem.     There can be such beauty in the thunderstorm.  I enjoyed this very much.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
Corinne
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4 posted 05-13-2000 10:34 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

mysteriously romantic, Sven.

Corinne
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5 posted 05-14-2000 12:06 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven,
You have captured the beauty of the raging storm in this piece.....and the beauty of your love.  Very well written, my friend.
LW


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--Michael W. Smith
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6 posted 05-14-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

...I will never look at a storm the same way again.  Very beautiful, powerful thoughts you have put to paper; I enjoyed the read.  

Christina =^..^=
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Sometimes I feel the depth of your love in your poetry is endless  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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