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a girl's sad life

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Bunny
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since 05-13-2000
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0 posted 05-13-2000 05:40 PM       View Profile for Bunny   Email Bunny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bunny

There is a girl over there
Crouched and hiding from the world
This girl is shaking
Why I do not know
This girl is hurting
Trying to carry her tears
She is running away
But she is not fast enough
This girl is in pain
A hurt from deep down inside her soul
This pain she has is causing confused thoughts
Now this girl is bleeding
She has made a fatal mistake
She tried to make it better
Tried to be set free
This girl is dying now,
This girl is me.....
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 08-26-99
Posts 1064
northern mountains, Idaho


1 posted 05-13-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Oh, don't ever believe that any mistake is fatal!  Don't give up.  Don't give up.  A heartrending poem.  Thank you for sharing.
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 The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.

JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


2 posted 05-13-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...we all want freedom...freedom to find someone we love and to be loved,  and freedom to make our own choices.   James
tincan5
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since 04-25-2000
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3 posted 05-13-2000 06:36 PM       View Profile for tincan5   Email tincan5   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tincan5

A very moving poem. Always remember, within you is something very special. Your life does have meaning and purpose and you can overcome anything     Sending you my very best wishes!
netswan
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since 03-28-2000
Posts 1395
Washington


4 posted 05-13-2000 06:55 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions, Bunny!

Sad poem -----but it is good to write
about feelings -----And, good to admit
that the girl is you.

Life has its ups and downs - we learn through
the down times so we can rejoice in the
happy times ------don't give up hope.

netswan
SpitFire
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since 04-19-2000
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5 posted 05-13-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Hang in there new friend....It helps to write it out of you..even if it is just a little bit.  You're good,...so keep 'em coming.
Slashed soul
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since 03-29-2000
Posts 92
England


6 posted 05-13-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Slashed soul   Email Slashed soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Slashed soul

In the silence of your dreams,
there is a thought, a love it seems,
Never feel down, your not alone,
my love lives very far from  home.

When you feel sad, remeber this,
the feeling you had, when you had your first kiss.

-Rich-
Dawn Eclipse
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since 01-31-2000
Posts 640
The Horsehead Nebula


7 posted 05-13-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

That was a very moving poem.  Never give up.  I've been there, but I've survived, so you can too!     hope to see more of your poetry soon!  Welcome.

 "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying."
Harry Anderson, "Night Court"

*Cassandra Roseen*
 
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