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Until I Can Have You

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CMGrimm
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0 posted 05-13-2000 04:13 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CMGrimm

Until I Can Have You


I didn't mean for this to happen
I didn't mean to fall in love
But when I look into your eyes
I see an angel from above

I never meant to let you get to me
I never meant to take the fall
But when you look at me and smile
I know you'll see me through it all

I never wanted to feel my heart break
I never wanted to feel this blue
But I'll just have to live with this
Until the day that I have you.

chris


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


© Copyright 2000 Christopher M. Grimm - All Rights Reserved
netswan
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1 posted 05-13-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Chris -----chin up!
Lovely poem -- though, sad.

netswan
CMGrimm
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2 posted 05-14-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks netswan.

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


Kit McCallum
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3 posted 05-14-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Nicely said Chris ... I hope she reciprocates!

Best wishes,
/Kit
CMGrimm
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4 posted 05-14-2000 09:17 AM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks kit...

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


SpitFire
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5 posted 05-14-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for SpitFire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SpitFire

~Chris,...hey there, this poem is lovely...sad message, but beautifully written.  *Hope all goes your way soon.  
lorilockheart
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6 posted 05-14-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

I really liked this one!  
Sad, yet so pretty.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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7 posted 05-15-2000 06:56 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ChrisG~
Stirring emotions.
~*Marge*~


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Danny Holloway
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8 posted 05-15-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

So quick it seems that a happy heart can become a broken heart...no explaining it seems.
~~nice writing~~

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

CMGrimm
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9 posted 05-15-2000 02:54 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks all of you..

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


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10 posted 05-15-2000 06:08 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Nice writing.I liked your poem very much.This is what I feel right now.
sonjes
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11 posted 05-16-2000 06:23 AM       View Profile for sonjes   Email sonjes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sonjes

Your verse says it all...from falling to breaking to hope.  That is hope I see at the end of the tunnel isn't it?
Eloquent words Chris.  Stated simply but beautifully. A message that knows no boundaries.

  Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma
CMGrimm
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12 posted 05-16-2000 10:48 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks vandana and sonjes...
it means alot that people still read me...lol

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


tulip
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13 posted 05-17-2000 01:26 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

I'm sorry you're going through it. I know the feeling all too well, I happen to be feeling the exact same thing.  We just have to keep facing forward, and take things one step at a time!
MysticalNights
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14 posted 05-17-2000 04:17 AM       View Profile for MysticalNights   Email MysticalNights   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MysticalNights

Great poem Chris.  I know exactly how you feel.....
tracie66
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15 posted 05-17-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Chris~
Touching poem, may all your wishes eventually come true  
Tracie~


 Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 05-17-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

These words struck a very tender chord
Thank you for this one
It's lovely
Liz
JamesMichael
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17 posted 05-17-2000 08:11 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"I never wanted to feel my heart break
I never wanted to feel this blue
But I'll just have to live with this
Until the day that I have you."
This is exactly the way I feel about Lena.   James
hoot_owl_rn
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18 posted 05-17-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh Chris...truly romantic. Nice to see you posting from time to time  
CMGrimm
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19 posted 05-21-2000 09:31 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

Thanks everyone...

and Ruth I only post to see YOUR responses..lol..j/k.

I don't get to post or respond as often as I'd like but I get in as often as I can.

chris

 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


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