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vandana
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0 posted 2000-05-13 11:42 AM


When I saw your eyes,
There was something in there,
Something I saw,
There was love in your eyes,
That caputures my heart,
I fell in love with your beautiful,
I see stars and sun in them,
I could see clouds in your eyes,
I won't hide feelings for you,
Cause I know
I will stay
Because your eyes
And love ,
I was lost in your eyes,
I was lost in your eyes,
I was lost in the clouds of your loving eyes,
I was lost in your eyes,
Wondered so many songs we heard and
fell in love with you,
Because of those beautiful eyes,
I was lost in your eyes,
I won't run from here,
Unless I feel the same for your love
You gave to me,

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-13 11:51 AM


Beautiful thoughts in this Vandana!  

Denise

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2 posted 2000-05-13 11:59 AM


Excellent vandana. . .this just sings with love and warmth. . . but also that you just won't stay without getting the same back in return. . .

Wonderful poem. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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