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Lost in your eyes

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vandana
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0 posted 05-13-2000 11:42 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

When I saw your eyes,
There was something in there,
Something I saw,
There was love in your eyes,
That caputures my heart,
I fell in love with your beautiful,
I see stars and sun in them,
I could see clouds in your eyes,
I won't hide feelings for you,
Cause I know
I will stay
Because your eyes
And love ,
I was lost in your eyes,
I was lost in your eyes,
I was lost in the clouds of your loving eyes,
I was lost in your eyes,
Wondered so many songs we heard and
fell in love with you,
Because of those beautiful eyes,
I was lost in your eyes,
I won't run from here,
Unless I feel the same for your love
You gave to me,
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1 posted 05-13-2000 11:51 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful thoughts in this Vandana!  

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2 posted 05-13-2000 11:59 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent vandana. . .this just sings with love and warmth. . . but also that you just won't stay without getting the same back in return. . .

Wonderful poem. . .

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