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Too Much

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ashley cain
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0 posted 05-13-2000 10:54 AM       View Profile for ashley cain   Email ashley cain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashley cain

   I found a hiding place deep within your soul.
   I found a friend to confide in with your heart.
   I found a void in that heart.
   It was a space.
   A blackhole.

   You'd missed something for so long, and I came to fill it up.

   There was little I could do to prove I loved you, but for some reason you said I did too much.


 
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 05-13-2000 08:44 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

hi ashley, welcome to passions.

I related to this poem well,
you expressed well the emotions when someone is so lost or hurt from damage that they cant love back and are oten smothered by our love that we try to give them
good work here.
take vare, jm


 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


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