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soulfulpoet
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0 posted 05-13-2000 09:38 AM       View Profile for soulfulpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for soulfulpoet

It's 2:37 a.m.
I sit on a lawn chair,
staring at the crystal clear navy sky.
Every star is different,
yet they're all equal in their beauty,
and all equal in their ability to take my breath away.
I've been out here for hours,
yet all the clear nights wouldn't be enough to take it all in.
Right at this moment, the sky is perfect.
A beautiful shooting star explodes.
Maybe there is one perfect thing in this world.
© Copyright 2000 Andrea - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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1 posted 05-13-2000 09:41 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

I do believe that there is something magical in a sky filled with stars, they always remind me of angels or bright souls. That was a beautiful poem, though I think 2.37 am is a bit late to be awake.  
soulfulpoet
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2 posted 05-13-2000 09:44 AM       View Profile for soulfulpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for soulfulpoet

haha I know 2:37 is late   but I couldn't sleep when I was writing this poem, so i decided to sit outside cause its so peaceful
REBECCA ALLYN
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3 posted 05-13-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

I agree!! really good work but 2:37 is so LATE!!!

LOTS of LUV,
Becky
 
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