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Dance with me

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Stargazer
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0 posted 05-13-2000 04:17 AM       View Profile for Stargazer   Email Stargazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Stargazer's Home Page   View IP for Stargazer

Whispering kisses to you
I wonder if you can feel their thoughts
diamond sharp in the point of my view
they make my heart bleed with the want to answer the drum
that I know echoes in your chest
my feet to slow to grace it's tune
I let the blood throb in my head
and envision pulses in my eyes
and though my mind aches
my heart leaps gracefully
and cries in passion
(for once there are no words to describe joy)
my dreams sway to the beat
thump-thumping through my conciousness
I remember only fragments
but your signature is embedded in each memory
and has been for longer then my soul will admit
stand with me now
and teach my the steps of love
and hold me when I stumble




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brian madden
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1 posted 05-13-2000 04:43 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

That may possibly be the intoxicating feeling of love,
I really enjoyed reading this poem.
some great images here,

"I wonder if you can feel their thoughts
diamond sharp in the point of my view"

"they make my heart bleed with the want to answer the drum"

"but your signature is embedded in each memory"

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