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di Morte
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since 2000-05-13
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0 posted 2000-05-13 01:38 AM



                   Toxic Dump
                  

Observe the effects of enraged, ugly spew
   on those who deserve kinder brew;
in those who've endured undeserved, rough abuse,
   can love long sustain its misuse?

Goodwill starves to death, its remains left to fill
   dank morgues where old friends dredge despair.
The fool, himself first, well-fed face hungry still,
   is stunned at neglect's noxious fare.  


              --Fr Veni di Morte
    


[This message has been edited by di Morte (edited 05-15-2000).]

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Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2000-05-13 01:40 AM


Interesting work here. The images were clear for sure.   Welcome to Passions.   I hope you'll settle in and stay a long spell.  


 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
2 posted 2000-05-13 01:45 AM


Welcome To Passions, di Morte!

This poem represents a tragedy, that just
doesn't have to be -----sometimes we
have to let go of past trash and go on
with our lives.

netswan


Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-05-13 08:56 AM


Interesting poem...very dark...welcome to the passions family! Please check your email for a special message. You may want to check out or Dark Passions forum too!  
di Morte
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since 2000-05-13
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4 posted 2000-05-15 01:35 AM


greetings, Temptress, netswan and Poet deVine(thank you for the lovely card   )))  )

thanks for taking the time to comment, it is
appreciated and I am grateful for the encouragement.

v

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