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Poem created simply by loving someone online..

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Holly
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0 posted 05-12-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

                 Two Souls

faces not shown but all emotions are known

two souls exploring each, through the distance they reach

dreams heard, lives unfold, fears spoken, and passions told

forever in the others thoughts, without the other each would be lost

a fire stirred within the souls of two, something rare that happens to few...




 
© Copyright 2000 Holly - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 05-12-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Welcome to Passions Holly   You've just described getting to know someone from the inside out...you penned it perfectly.  Thank you for sharing this!
Irie
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2 posted 05-13-2000 12:11 AM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

This is simply sweet and full of emotions.
Well written and Welcome to Passions Holly.  
Temptress
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3 posted 05-13-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Welcome, and what a wonderful poem to start off with.   I'll look forward to reading more of your work.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"
netswan
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4 posted 05-13-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions, Holly!

What a sentimental sweet poem - a rare
love indeed!

netswan
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5 posted 05-13-2000 08:54 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to Passions....please check your email for a special message.  
Severn
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6 posted 05-13-2000 09:03 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Welcome!

Been here...

it is a good place to be at the time.

I like the simplicity here...good work!

poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 05-13-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Holly, this is just lovely!  Simple but warm nonetheless.  Glad to have you sharing and posting here, Welcome!  You reminded me how good that "online feeling" can feel.  Getting to know someone from the inside out - however, it's just not the same as in person.  Sometimes, you think you know someone, but you truly don't.  That can be good, and sometimes even bad.  I know firsthand.  I'm so glad your "feelings" are warm!  Hope to see more from you!  

 "Laugh and the world laughs with you..." cry, and you're all alone. My version - pFF


soulfulpoet
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8 posted 05-13-2000 09:40 AM       View Profile for soulfulpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for soulfulpoet

I really loved this poem. I have a best friend whos like a brother to me that I met online and talk to every day..This was an awesome poem.  
Sudhir Iyer
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WELCOME TO PASSIONS  

Hope that you enjoy your stay here. This place is beautiful and hope that you find it that way...

By the way, this is a beautiful entry...Looking for more from you!!!

Regards,
Sudhir.

 Life is like a painting,
That in an art gallery is left hanging,
Though many come just to look at it,
A very few actually come to enjoy it.
hsystems
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10 posted 05-13-2000 10:16 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Holly - what a wonderful choice for your first post!  This poem is packed with emotion, and has a very good flow.  I can also relate to it, having been involved in several online relationships myself (one of them lasted over a year, though we never met "face to face.")  Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, and welcome to Passions!


Troy

 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm


Holly
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11 posted 05-13-2000 12:12 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

I just wanted to say thank you to all the responded to my first entry. From reading so many of the poems here, I feel like I am in the best of company. Thank you again for those sweet words!

sincerely,
-Holly
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