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My Soul's Decree

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ashley cain
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0 posted 05-12-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for ashley cain   Email ashley cain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashley cain

       My mind is shot by all these delusions.
       I've fallen from the branch of sanity.
       My hope, joy, devoured by illusions.
       This love I've felt defies laws of gravity.

       Our restless spirits need each other now.
       My soul needs a beautiful new loved one.
       Your poor little heart wants to find out how.
       If we touvh in sin then all worlds shall shun.

       Must I mention the earth from which you came?
       Must I declare my heart an unknown fortress?
       So I will, for all human laws are lame.
       I consider what is "wrong" very worthless.

               Here it is my sinful decree of love.
               May it not be blasphemous to God above.


 
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Irie
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1 posted 05-12-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

"Fallen from the branch of Sanity"
Very powerful words here Ashley, through out this entire poem.
Well expressed and written.
Welcome to Passions.  


netswan
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2 posted 05-13-2000 02:21 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Welcome to Passions, Ashley
and such a passionate poem

netswan
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State of constant confusion!


3 posted 05-13-2000 03:39 AM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

Welcome to passions....great first post...can't wait to read more

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

brian madden
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4 posted 05-13-2000 04:49 AM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Great first posting, a dark poem,

"Must I mention the earth from which you came?
Must I declare my heart an unknown fortress?"
I love those lines.
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Welcome to the passions family! I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special message!  
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