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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2000-05-12 10:08 PM



Mom
~~~


A  seed  was  planted  long  ago
by  loving  caring  hands
With  grace  of  god  and  tender  care
it  grew  from  blessed  sands
~
Our  family  tree  you  nourished
with  love  and  understanding
The  task  at  hand  you  met  with  grace
though  taxing  and  demanding
~
Our  branches  grew
so  straight  and  strong
Your  efforts  plain  to  see
A  multitude  of  fragrant  blooms
each  year  we  give  to  thee
~
We  reminisce  with  sentiment
emotions  overcome
No  card
no  flower
no  spoken  word
can  thank  the  lord  for
Mom
~~~

© Copyright 2000 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
CocoBaci
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1 posted 2000-05-12 10:20 PM


This is sweet!

CocoBaci

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2 posted 2000-05-12 10:54 PM


Rex~
This is just the sweetest heartfelt poem.
What a guy !
Tell 'mom' for me ... she done good !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2000-05-13 01:50 AM


Beautifully simple. I love it.  

 Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"

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4 posted 2000-05-13 01:55 AM


Just makes me want to say, "Amen, brother."      I loved it.

Christina =^..^=

netswan
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5 posted 2000-05-13 04:12 AM


Rex what a wonderful card for your mom
and how lucky she and you are ---)

netswan

WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-05-13 09:39 AM


Woohoo Rex! You said it well!  Thank you Rex for putting it in such a wonderful way  
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7 posted 2000-05-13 11:27 AM


It's quite evident how well your Mom did! This is absolutely beautiful, Rex!

Denise

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
8 posted 2000-05-13 04:40 PM


Thankyou everyone for the beautiful replies ... I wrote this to give to my mother along with some flowers and a dinner engagement ... posting it was not really my initial intent ... but noticed there were a few others posted so I added this to the collection
Thanks again

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9 posted 2000-05-13 08:45 PM


Beautiful poem.I liked it a lot!
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
10 posted 2000-05-14 11:50 AM


Thankyou vandana ... there are a multitude of the worlds best amature poets that gather here at passions ... with more dropping in each day ... I love to sit and read ... at no monitary cost ... and I couldn't find better poetry in any store bought book ... I wish I had the time to read and reply to more ... especially the replies are of great importance to a writer and I thankyou for yours ... I post in other forums where I get no replies, but it does show the hit count for each poem ... some are in the hundreds ... so to those who don't get many replies ... remember that a lot more people read than do reply ... thanks to everyone again for your kindness and Happy Mothers Day to all

Corinne
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11 posted 2000-05-14 01:21 PM


Lovely tribute, Rex, and I swear I read yours after I posted mine (family tree reference)!

Corinne

Rex Allen McCoy
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12 posted 2000-05-14 01:30 PM


no problem Corinne ... there's lots of trees
to go around

HelmutB
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13 posted 2000-05-14 02:55 PM


Very nice and absolutly beautiful
Well done Rex

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Rex Allen McCoy
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14 posted 2000-05-14 08:27 PM


Helmut ... good to see you stretching your wings ... hope you find time to post a few for us to read
thankyou for the the kind reply

Rex

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