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Invisible Dance. . .

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Sven
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0 posted 05-12-2000 07:18 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Take my hand
            dance with me
Playing our song
            just for us

The people disappear
            when we're here
On the floor
            you and me

Moving as one
            with the music
Eyes on each
            hands held close

Melody takes us
            to that place
Where lovers meet
            heart in heart

Love flows free
            between our hearts
Together my love
            never to part

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Skyfyre
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1 posted 05-12-2000 07:22 PM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

Sven, my friend, if this were any other day I would be brimming over with enthusiasm and compliments for you ... but to be honest, I have not the stomach for this sort of bliss right now.

Suffice it to say that I'm glad ONE of us is having fun ... LOL  

--Kess


 Full fathom five thy father lies,
Of his bones are coral made,
Those are pearls that were his eyes;
Nothing of him that doth fade
But doth suffer a sea-change
Into something rich and strange...


--William Shakespeare, from The Tempest

Nan
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2 posted 05-12-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sven - This sounds like a dream come true... Nice vision you''ve created here, my friend..
Kellsue
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3 posted 05-12-2000 08:03 PM       View Profile for Kellsue   Email Kellsue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellsue

Sven ~ Beautiful, descriptive poem...I'm ready to be wisked away to the ball by Prince Charming!!!  Wonderful!

~Kelly


 ~Kellsue

Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens

We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill


Janet Marie
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4 posted 05-12-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

LOL at Kess's reply..oh come on Kess put on your dancing shoes and trip the light fantastic with sweet Sven...
if a dance with him cant cure what ails us...
were done for *SMILE*

and may I have a dance when your done.
perfect poem Sven-gator
jm
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5 posted 05-13-2000 02:40 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Short and sweet, Sven.  Very nice writing...
Great images...  


 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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6 posted 05-13-2000 02:48 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Sven, such pleasure is found
Reading your poems on line

CocoBaci
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7 posted 05-13-2000 09:13 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Aaahhh to dance with that special someone, where everyone else in the room disappears....*sigh*  How lovely this was sir...Made me smile this morning.  Thank you!     You painted such a "content" love here.
Sven
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8 posted 05-13-2000 12:37 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . .

Kess. . . yes, one of us is having fun, but I look a little silly out here by myself!  Come on, you never know, it might make you feel better. . .

Nan. . .thank you. . .

Kellsue. . . great!  Are you sure that you've got your glass slippers?  

Janet. . .you are definitely next on the card!  

LW. . . thank you my friend. . . the images just come. . .

Coco. . .thank you, I'm glad that you enjoy them. . .

Femme. . .glad that I could start your day with a smile   . . .and my brush continues to paint. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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