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CocoBaci
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0 posted 05-12-2000 05:30 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CocoBaci

His muse is a temptuous ballerina
A vision of elegance poised and perched
The strain along her calves
Heats like a drum inside a caldron
Infinite imagination resonnates
Circles of glistening stars
From the pink bow near her heart
To the salty tears upon her cheeks
Her palms weathered tortuous storms
Her fingers scorhing fury of flame
Of tying the knot that is on her heart

The pinkish bow
The blueish hue
The one he treasures
His beloved muse

His love is a vainglorious throne
Such passion and desire set in marble stone
The blame along her thighs the rain along her hips
Pitter-patters like her sweaty palms across his adoring lips
Kiss her but once he now explores
To touch her he needs more
To feel her he is consumed with love from her

The pinkish bow
The blueish hue
The one he treasures
His beloved muse.

~ CocoBaci ~
© Copyright 2000 CocoBaci - All Rights Reserved
REBECCA ALLYN
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1 posted 05-12-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

No words, just WOW!!
Please keep writing, you are awesome!!


LOTS of LUV,
Becky
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2 posted 05-12-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

I like the dance Coco...



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
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Phew... it sure is hot in here. I love the images in this poem.

"His muse is a temptuous ballerina"

"Heats like a drum inside a caldron"

"Infinite imagination resonnates"

"His love is a vainglorious throne"

Wonderful poem.


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4 posted 05-12-2000 05:54 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

My thanks to you for sharing your kind thoughts & sweet ~phew's~ too .. as I shyly giggle!
CocoBaci
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5 posted 05-12-2000 06:27 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent Coco. . .

I really like this one. . . it would seem that the muses are out in full force these days!!

Wonderful. . .

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6 posted 05-12-2000 06:49 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

CocoBaci~
A delight read.
I love it when the muses are on parade.
~*Marge*~


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Sven & Marge
... Full force & on parade ...
This makes me     the words you write to me today!
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It is getting hot in here......LOL Great poem, Coco!

Denise
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Lovely coco -----a muse is a muse
this one appears to be a very passionate
muse ---)

netswan
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D ~ you make me giggle
Swan ~ i luv the "a muse is a muse"
Hugs from afar .. CocoBaci
 
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