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Beloved Muse
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Beloved Muse |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
His muse is a temptuous ballerina A vision of elegance poised and perched The strain along her calves Heats like a drum inside a caldron Infinite imagination resonnates Circles of glistening stars From the pink bow near her heart To the salty tears upon her cheeks Her palms weathered tortuous storms Her fingers scorhing fury of flame Of tying the knot that is on her heart The pinkish bow The blueish hue The one he treasures His beloved muse His love is a vainglorious throne Such passion and desire set in marble stone The blame along her thighs the rain along her hips Pitter-patters like her sweaty palms across his adoring lips Kiss her but once he now explores To touch her he needs more To feel her he is consumed with love from her The pinkish bow The blueish hue The one he treasures His beloved muse. ~ CocoBaci ~ |
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REBECCA ALLYN Member
since 2000-05-09
Posts 91Lima,Ohio |
No words, just WOW!! Please keep writing, you are awesome!! LOTS of LUV, Becky |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I like the dance Coco... If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Phew... it sure is hot in here. I love the images in this poem. "His muse is a temptuous ballerina" "Heats like a drum inside a caldron" "Infinite imagination resonnates" "His love is a vainglorious throne" Wonderful poem. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
My thanks to you for sharing your kind thoughts & sweet ~phew's~ too .. as I shyly giggle! CocoBaci |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Coco. . . I really like this one. . . it would seem that the muses are out in full force these days!! Wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ A delight read. I love it when the muses are on parade. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven & Marge ... Full force & on parade ... This makes me  the words you write to me today! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It is getting hot in here......LOL Great poem, Coco! Denise |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely coco -----a muse is a muse this one appears to be a very passionate muse ---) netswan |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
D ~ you make me giggle Swan ~ i luv the "a muse is a muse" Hugs from afar .. CocoBaci |
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