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Supernatural Kiss

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Nate Dogg
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since 11-15-1999
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Georgia, Fulton


0 posted 05-12-2000 05:19 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This piece came out of my first notebook of poems. I hope y'll enjoy it!

Baby, kiss me one more time
because, I love it when your lips touch mine.
Baby, kiss me one more time,
to reassure me that you're exclusively mine.
Baby, please kiss me one more time
because your kiss,
is too hard to resist.
Never before, have I found a girl who's kiss,
left me breathless.
Never before, have I found a girl who's kiss,
left me helpless.
Never before, have I found a girl who's kiss,
could hypnotize me
as well as mesmorize me.
Her kiss could instantly
lift my soul out of my body.
Her kiss is like magic
and I got to have it.
Her kiss is so powerful that without it,
life wouldn't be the same
because, I would go totally insane.

 Nathan
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REBECCA ALLYN
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since 05-09-2000
Posts 91
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1 posted 05-12-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

~Hey,Nate~
Really good work I really like this poem
keep them I up!!


LOTS of LUV,
Becky
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


2 posted 05-12-2000 05:31 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Lovely and descriptive thoughts Nate.  I too enjoy a good kiss...reminds me of my old friend Cappy VanBuskirk...when we kissed her lips melted into mine...a fusing of the lips... it was totally supernatural..
ha....ha.....James
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


3 posted 05-12-2000 05:47 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Rebecca for your lovely comments
and thank you James for your wonderful comments.

 Nathan
Denise
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4 posted 05-12-2000 08:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like quite a kiss!  

Denise
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5 posted 05-13-2000 04:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Nate, my friend~
Sounds magical to me !
~*Marge*~


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netswan
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Washington


6 posted 05-13-2000 07:34 AM       View Profile for netswan   Email netswan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit netswan's Home Page   View IP for netswan

Hi Nate ----wow such a lot of thoughts
on kissing -- well written poem

netswan
Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton


7 posted 05-16-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Denise, Marge, and netswan for your lovely comments!

 Nathan
Holly
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since 05-12-2000
Posts 127
Arkansas


8 posted 05-16-2000 07:54 PM       View Profile for Holly   Email Holly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Holly's Home Page   View IP for Holly

Nate,
Now that's a KISS! I have had very few kisses like that myself, but man, I'm willing to read more about yours! Great work!!

-Holly


 
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