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*Making Love*

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REBECCA ALLYN
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0 posted 05-12-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

                 *Making Love*


Even in the dark I can feel his eyes penetrate deep within my soul
though my many flaws he has vowed to take me whole
His eyes are so beautifully intense this is so much more than lust
this feeling is something I can not compromise
loving him is a must
Though his caress is so gentle he is strong enough to make me weak
his blissfully soft kisses make my lips unable to speak
He whispers his promises of pleasure so very pure
no need to ask me
this is what I want my love I feel for sure
Silently I plead for this love to last forever
the way I feel with him is something that I thought I'd feel never
He takes my hand and together this journey we glide
for us it is so important to feel these emotions side by side
His love is so amazing he takes my breath away
as I reach this perfect heaven there is something i must say
As I cling to this man whose eyes with mine meet
I can feel every inch of him how fast his heart beats
I close my eyes and drift to this place so divine
He slowly whispers I love you and I my dear
I whisper back,I love you too

© Copyright 2000 REBECCA ALLYN - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 05-12-2000 04:47 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry


This is awesome!!  You have captured it so perfectly, thank you for sharing your gift with us.
CocoBaci
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2 posted 05-12-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

One chance at one's heart and perhaps true love can be found ~ Well, it looks like you may have found yours.  This was really sweet reading.
CocoBaci
Danny Holloway
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3 posted 05-12-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Excellent expression in this poem.  Can really feel the love flowing through!
~~nice writing~~


 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

REBECCA ALLYN
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4 posted 05-12-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

You guys are so sweet!!!
Thanks


LOTS of LUV,
Becky
Nate Dogg
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5 posted 05-12-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

This is one of the best love poems I've ever read and I mean it too. In fact, I wish that I could write one like that. It was so expressive and totally from the heart. You deserve the word classic next to this piece.

 Nathan
REBECCA ALLYN
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6 posted 05-12-2000 06:16 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Nathan,
  You are such a sweetheart!! But way to kind
I do appreciate your support
I guess I am just a hopeless romantic!!


LOTS of LUV,
Becky
EagleOne
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7 posted 05-12-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Bravo Rebecca!!  The world could do with some more hopless romantics    Well Done!

 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 05-12-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

BeckyAllyn~
This is so refreshing.
Good to see romanticism alive and flourishing.
~*Marge*~


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Denise
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9 posted 05-12-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very beautiful, Becky!  

Denise
REBECCA ALLYN
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10 posted 05-13-2000 10:04 AM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Thanks again guys and I agree we do need more hopeless romantics !!!

LOTS of LUV,
Becky
hsystems
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11 posted 05-13-2000 10:10 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Becky, excellent work - you go, girl!  And, in regard to your comment about being a hopeless romantic - I like to think of it as being a hopeful romantic, rather than a hopeless one.


Troy

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lorilockheart
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12 posted 05-14-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for lorilockheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lorilockheart

Becky,
This made my heart melt - and ache too.

You have done an excellent job here.  Every emotion, feeling, and all the intensity wrapped up into this one moment.

Awesome.
Lori

 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dark Angel
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13 posted 05-15-2000 01:31 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW!!! LOVED THIS!   Excellent!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Enola
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14 posted 05-15-2000 07:01 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

This is stunning!  It has to be one of the best odes to a loved one that I have ever read.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.

REBECCA ALLYN
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15 posted 05-15-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Thanks once again guys for being so sweet and making me blush!!!!

LOTS of LUV,
Becky
CMGrimm
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16 posted 05-15-2000 06:23 PM       View Profile for CMGrimm   Email CMGrimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CMGrimm

From on hopeful romantic to another...fantastic piece!

seriously this is a well written piece that captures the true essence of romance.

thanks for a great read.

chris


 Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.


REBECCA ALLYN
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17 posted 05-15-2000 06:25 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Chris,
  Thank you so much for your compliment
it means a great deal to me!!


Thanks!!
LOTS of LUV,
Becky
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18 posted 05-15-2000 06:32 PM       View Profile for Jeffrey Carter   Email Jeffrey Carter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeffrey Carter

'Becca, Truly lovely poem....made my heart smile
Thanks for sharing it with us!

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

RainbowGirl
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19 posted 05-15-2000 07:30 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Heck Rebecca!!!!...How am I supposed to sleep on my pillow - alone, now????...ok, so, I'll dream..

Super poem, brings backs memories so true  

HUGS
REBECCA ALLYN
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20 posted 05-16-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

Jeffrey,
   Thank you so much!! I am glad yor heart is smiling.


Rainbowgirl,
    Thanks!! I hope you had pleasant dreams!!!!

LOTS of LUV,
Becky
JamesMichael
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21 posted 05-16-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"His blissfully soft lips leave me unable to speak".   These are the kisses that make life a passion worth living.   James
Corazon
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22 posted 05-16-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

yep will ditto jmlee on that....nice to see someone "making love" instead of tearing it down  

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