Even in the dark I can feel his eyes penetrate deep within my soul though my many flaws he has vowed to take me whole His eyes are so beautifully intense this is so much more than lust this feeling is something I can not compromise loving him is a must Though his caress is so gentle he is strong enough to make me weak his blissfully soft kisses make my lips unable to speak He whispers his promises of pleasure so very pure no need to ask me this is what I want my love I feel for sure Silently I plead for this love to last forever the way I feel with him is something that I thought I'd feel never He takes my hand and together this journey we glide for us it is so important to feel these emotions side by side His love is so amazing he takes my breath away as I reach this perfect heaven there is something i must say As I cling to this man whose eyes with mine meet I can feel every inch of him how fast his heart beats I close my eyes and drift to this place so divine He slowly whispers I love you and I my dear I whisper back,I love you too
This is one of the best love poems I've ever read and I mean it too. In fact, I wish that I could write one like that. It was so expressive and totally from the heart. You deserve the word classic next to this piece.
You have done an excellent job here. Every emotion, feeling, and all the intensity wrapped up into this one moment.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance. song by LeeAnn Womack ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~