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lucky
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0 posted 05-12-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lucky



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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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1 posted 05-12-2000 04:37 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney


Oh, honey, this is terrible!
It wrings out the contents of my
heart like a dishrag - sometimes your
sorrow can cast me into a sea of
sadness for your griefs. Very
beautifully written, but
much, much too sad! I
love you so much.



CocoBaci
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2 posted 05-12-2000 04:43 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Be still my beating heart
This poem just brings my breath to halt
As I read each verse you write
With such emotion and feeling
My oh my, this was exceptional reading.
CocoBaci
REBECCA ALLYN
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3 posted 05-12-2000 05:05 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

For once in my life I am truly speechless.
This is completly breathtaking

LOTS OF LUV,
Becky
lucky
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4 posted 05-12-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

RJ,

Thank you so much sweet heart, and by the way I'm a long way from the graveyard... I hope!

Coco,

I hope you've gotten your breath back, never mind your heart just let it bounce around on the floor awhile.

All kidding aside I have to tell you that my inspiration for this one came from "Hoot Owl's" (Reflections lost) which I do have to say is very tasty. She's one of my teachers but doesn't know it... I didn't pay my tuition this semester and am just sneeking around the back skirts of the 'stute trying to keep a low profile. Sheeesh, I hope I'm not busted.



 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
lucky
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5 posted 05-12-2000 05:20 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

Becky,

You little sneek. Now just look at yourself, if all these people keep losing their breath I'm going to get busted.


 If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley)
 
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