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~Horizon~

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REBECCA ALLYN
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0 posted 05-12-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for REBECCA ALLYN   Email REBECCA ALLYN   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for REBECCA ALLYN

As I sit here and watch the sun fall beneath the picture perfect sky
I can't help but stop myself and demand to know why
The love I have for you continues each day to grow
I try so hard to show it
I can't believe how much I need you to know
Every time you kiss my lips I'm so over whelmed
I close my eyes my thoughts run deep
You grasp my hand and hold me close as I begin to weep
Time and time again I can feel myself fall
Please put me through all these emotions
I want to feel it all
All of this I'm feeling is so brand new
I know that all of this I want
you are feeling too
So together we will reach our destination
in love forever more
As we watch the sun slip through the picture perfect horizon


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brian madden
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since 05-06-2000
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1 posted 05-12-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for brian madden   Email brian madden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brian madden

Beautiful...I hope your love together is eternal.

"So together we will reach our destination
in love forever more
As we watch the sun slip through the picture perfect horizon" I love that image.
great poem.
Irie
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2 posted 05-12-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for Irie   Email Irie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irie

Hey Rebecca....You have really etched a wonderful image in my mind
with this one. How Beautiful, breath taking!  
Thank you for sharing this!

~Sheri

amazon_lover
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3 posted 05-12-2000 03:08 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Hi Rebbeca!
That was so beautiful. I just keep waiting for the day. I love her so much and its a long wait for me to see her. But I just see her and the times we had ,everyday in my minds eye and I'm just waiting. Thanks for the read.
((((hugs))))))))
A_L
Denise
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4 posted 05-12-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is oh so beautiful, Rebecca! Simply beautiful!

Denise
Janet Marie
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5 posted 05-12-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is excellent..indeed
you have so perfectly  captuted those
intense feelings of anticipation and fascination that we crave so when it is all new and exciting.
superb work.
take care, jm


 It's amazing
How you make your face just like a wall
How you take your heart and turn it off
How I turn my head and you lose it all ...
And it's unnerving
How one move just puts me by myself
There you go just trusting someone else
Now I know I put us both through hell ...
I'm not sayin
That there was nothing wrong
I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me
And I'm not sayin
We ever had the right to hold on
I just didn't wanna let you get away from me.
~MB20~Leave


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